Template:Did you know nominations/San Antonio Municipal Auditorium

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The result was: promoted by Sven Manguard Wha? 04:26, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

San Antonio Municipal Auditorium edit

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... that the San Antonio Municipal Auditorium (pictured) was constructed as a memorial to America's World War I military deaths?

ALT1:... that the original stage curtain at the San Antonio Municipal Auditorium (pictured), was painted with likenesses of James Bowie, Davy Crockett, William B. Travis and James Butler Bonham?
Reviewed: First Nations in Alberta

Created by Maile66 (talk). Self nominated at 01:10, 17 March 2014 (UTC).

interesting article and hooks on good sources. I prefer the original hook and would reword it slightly, less technically:

ALT2: ... that the San Antonio Municipal Auditorium (pictured) was built as a memorial to American soldiers killed in World War I?

Consider to make the first paragraph with the many citations part of the body and leave just a summary as the lead, mentioning the hook fact ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:29, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

I like ALT2 rewording of the hook, and am OK to go with that. Took your suggestion on the lead.— Maile (talk) 12:46, 8 April 2014 (UTC)

ALT2 preferred, image free and a good illustration, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:49, 8 April 2014 (UTC)