Template:Did you know nominations/Ruth Taubert Seeger

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:40, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Ruth Taubert Seeger edit

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... ~~that Ruth Taubert Seeger was the first deaf American female to compete for the United States track and field team in the 1957 Deaflympics?~~

ALT1: ... that Ruth Taubert Seeger established the Texas School for the Deaf's first girls track and field team in 1963?
ALT2: ... that Ruth Taubert Seeger started the Texas School for the Deaf's volleyball team in 1973?
ALT3: ... that Ruth Taubert Seeger established the Texas School for the Deaf's softball team in 1986?

Reviewed: Netty Herawaty

Created by Z105space (talk). Self-nominated at 21:02, 8 May 2016 (UTC).

Great article, great hook. Length, date of nom, QPQ, and sourcing check out. No copyvio detected. --Al Ameer (talk) 17:14, 12 May 2016 (UTC)

Z105space I pulled this out of Prep. The hook is a copyvio, word-for-word from the source. Please write a new hook. The new hook needs a new reviewer, and it wouldn't hurt for the new reviewer to check the rest of the article against the sources. — Maile (talk) 23:25, 14 May 2016 (UTC)

@Maile66: I have acted on your suggestion. Z105space (talk) 05:29, 15 May 2016 (UTC)

Well, I kept hoping someone would re-review this now that you had written new hooks. And here it's been 10 days since you did that. Reticking with the turn-around so someone can notice and review your new hooks. Sorry it's taking so long. — Maile (talk) 19:55, 25 May 2016 (UTC)

ALT1 and ALT3 could be used as both have inline citations to a reliable source. However they do not really do justice to this athlete. How about

ALT4 ... that Ruth Taubert Seeger represented the United States in the 1957 Deaflympics and was still competing successfully in the 2002 Senior Games of San Antonio? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:01, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

@Cwmhiraeth: Yes that sounds very interesting. Z105space (talk) 06:22, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

Somebody else will be needed to review it. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:30, 26 May 2016 (UTC)

This hook is the most interesting of all and free of paraphrasing. To do a full review again – article is long enough, was nominated on the same day as creation, QPQ done, hook is verified by inline citations. Good to go. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:45, 29 May 2016 (UTC)

Is this hook meant for use on MainPage any time now, or for T:TDYK#September 7-18 (2016 Summer Paralympics)? --PFHLai (talk) 19:18, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
@PFHLai: I would prefer if the hook were to be run as soon as possible. Z105space (talk) 19:26, 29 May 2016 (UTC)