- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 00:00, 1 August 2024 (UTC)
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Logan Edra
- ... that Olympic breakdancer Logan Edra only got into the sport when her father tricked her into taking classes?
- Source: NBC ("Logan Edra started breaking when she was seven years old after her father tricked her into taking a class")
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Shachar Sagiv (2/2)
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 215 past nominations.
BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:41, 20 July 2024 (UTC).
- Sammi Brie, you reviewed the other female breakdancer nominated for DYK. Maybe you could be interested in reviewing this one as well. And if you can think of a way of combining this into one hook, that would be superb. Schwede66 02:33, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
@BeanieFan11: This is mostly fine in length and hook fact presence. I note the hook fact is not cited to NBC News but an interview done by NBC's PR team, and I am not sure how I feel about that. I do need QPQ as well. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:17, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11: Please provide a QPQ or this will be closed as unsuccessful. Z1720 (talk) 15:25, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Sammi Brie: QPQ done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:02, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
Done. I'm okay-ish with the hook fact given it's part of an interview. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:46, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11, Sammi Brie, and Schwede66: There was a suggestion to merge this hook and Manizha Talash. I suggest ... that the Olympic breakdancers Logan Edra and Manizha Talash respectively got into the sport after seeing a video "of a man just spinning over his head" and being tricked into taking classes by her father?--Launchballer 07:27, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- That's fine by me. Schwede66 07:32, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Awkward? Yes. Workable? Probably. (Put commas around "respectively") Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:42, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- What, as in "that the Olympic breakdancers Logan Edra and Manizha Talash, respectively, got into the sport after seeing a video "of a man just spinning over his head" and being tricked into taking classes by her father? That feels really comma splicey. Unless I'm totally misreading WP:CINS, commas should be used if the sentence can be split in two standalone sentences and this can't - or is there another nuance I'm not aware of?--Launchballer 16:55, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- What's the need for merging the hooks? The two are the only Olympic hooks scheduled for that day. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:08, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- What, as in "that the Olympic breakdancers Logan Edra and Manizha Talash, respectively, got into the sport after seeing a video "of a man just spinning over his head" and being tricked into taking classes by her father? That feels really comma splicey. Unless I'm totally misreading WP:CINS, commas should be used if the sentence can be split in two standalone sentences and this can't - or is there another nuance I'm not aware of?--Launchballer 16:55, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- @Launchballer: Awkward? Yes. Workable? Probably. (Put commas around "respectively") Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 16:42, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- That's fine by me. Schwede66 07:32, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11, Sammi Brie, and Schwede66: There was a suggestion to merge this hook and Manizha Talash. I suggest ... that the Olympic breakdancers Logan Edra and Manizha Talash respectively got into the sport after seeing a video "of a man just spinning over his head" and being tricked into taking classes by her father?--Launchballer 07:27, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
- @BeanieFan11, Sammi Brie, and Launchballer: we now have three female breakdancers nominated for 9 August. I have drafted a combined hook at Template:Did you know nominations/Sunny Choi. Are you happy for me to close this nomination and transfer the credits to the Sunny Choi nomination page? Schwede66 03:08, 31 July 2024 (UTC)
