Talk:Yu Minhong

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Yuhanqiu. Peer reviewers: Boulderboy123, Eviarengo.

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History of this article

• The user-space article User:Liao12/Yu Minhong was edited from 15:51, 8 April 2011 to 23:24, 11 May 2011, all but one edits being by User:Liao12. At 02:44, 5 May 2011 the article Yu Minhong was started, and has been edited 9 more times since, presumably being copy-and pasted or updated from User:Liao12/Yu Minhong, likely more than once. That resulted in a period of WP:Parallel histories between them, and thus regrettably I felt that history-merge was unadvisable here. Anthony Appleyard (talk) 14:11, 13 May 2011 (UTC)

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Wiki sanbox

I am doing my sandbox assignment on this article. The article had some problems and I tried to fix them. The first problem I found was some grammar and spelling mistakes in the original article. Mostly was spelling and tense misusing. I also found that in the article the phrase "Qinghua University" did not have a link to the wiki page about it, so I added the link. In addition, the article appeared to be written like an advertisement in the section of New Oriental, because New Oriental was a name of a corporation and some of its description was biased, thus I deleted some of the sentences that violated the NPOV rule and replaced with some more neutral comments on the company. This is my sandbox page, I hope people can find more mistakes and fixed them!https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Binnan_Zhang/sandbox&action=edit&preload=Template%3AUser_sandbox%2Fpreload — Preceding unsigned comment added by Binnan Zhang (talk • contribs) 04:53, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

I am doing my sandbox assignment on this article. At first glance of this article, there are two boxes on the top of page illustrate the article requires copyediting for its grammar, style,cohesion,tone and speling. Also the article appears like an advertisement which needs us to improve it by rewriting its promotion contents. By the time when I fixing, I consult some wikipedia project conventions-biography for living person, and add category of overview, timeline,personal honor which may make it more specific. Also, I change some spelling and tense mistake in the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Savannacao (talk • contribs) 02:50, 10 March 2014 (UTC)

Revision

The article contains some errors on grammars and spellings, i checked and made some needed changes. Also, i added some more information about Yu Hongmin's early life which was from Chinese web sources, and corrected some suspected advertising information.The article should focus more on his personal journey rather than his business information.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jangwoodi/sandbox

References

Response on “Peer review 1” by Boulderboy123

Many thanks to Boulderboy123. You really paid much attention to the review, and your comments really help broader my editing view for such a sort-of international figure from emerging country. The photo thing was tough for almost all of his photos online require tedious permission process to get the copyright. So I added a photo of his company taken by myself when I studied there. For your “Yu Minhong” part, I may not change sentences created by former contributors for I am not sure about their contexts and purposes, and possible origins as resources (same for following sections). However, I will take advantage of your grammar and tone suggestions, which are very beneficial (same for following sections). Yuhanqiu (talk) 16:26, 21 April 2016 (UTC)

Response on “Peer review 2” by Eviarengo

Many thanks to Eviarengo though I will not take all of your suggestions into account. Clearly wiki pages should be more properly edited to reduce the impact of culture shock to the largest extent. For the reason I said in the previous response section to Boulderboy123, I will not change sentences which were created by former contributors and look improperly edited or sourced. Yuhanqiu (talk) 16:39, 21 April 2016 (UTC)