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Since you have two album nominees pending, it is only fair for me to take this on! --K. Peake 10:51, 23 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for giving it a look 😁 웃OO 14:36, 23 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
100cellsman Thank you for the initial response; you have missed a few points, which I have addressed below as well as providing further comments! --K. Peake 11:49, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
Not done --K. Peake 11:49, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
Change electronic dance to EDM in the infobox because the source calls the album "electronic dance music", which is another way of saying the genre EDM
Not done I meant list the genre as EDM
Remove wikilink on studio album
"The album is believed to define" → "It is considered to define" since he himself said it
Jazz should not start with capitalisation
Change electronic dance to EDM per earlier comment
Not done --K. Peake 11:49, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
The last sentence of the first paragraph is fine, but you should write about the shifts and traditional jazz info in the comp section since it is only mentioned in reception currently
I changed it to include the other genres mentioned instead. 웃OO 22:43, 23 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
That actually looks a lot better, great job! --K. Peake 11:49, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
"was announced with" → "was announced simultaneously with"
Not done --K. Peake 11:49, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
"The former track" → "The second of the three tracks"
Not done this is to specify which "former" track is being referred to --K. Peake 11:49, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
"received generally favorable reviews" → "received generally favourable reviews" because this is an English article
Not done the article is in British English, remember --K. Peake 11:49, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
"and electronic dance which" → "and EDM which" per the source, as it says the album is "electronic dance music" and that is EDM
"genre experimentation… Wu Hen" → "genre experimentation[...] Wu Hen" since that is how ellipsis are used to cut parts out of quotes
"through Atwood-Ferguson and Bzhezinska's" → "through Miguel Atwood-Ferguson and Alina Bzhezinska's" since it is fine to write full names if directly quoting a source
"from Paul and Mason"." → "from Greg Paul and Quinn Mason."" per MOS:QUOTE
Mention the lengths of the audio samples on their text
On the first sample, target traditional jazz to trad jazz
On the second sample, remove the introduction to "Mr. Wu" being a track and target club music to Electronic dance music
These are my opening comments; expect the rest tomorrow! --K. Peake 22:01, 23 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but good luck with this short article! --K. Peake 11:49, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
Thanks, I'll probably be busy the next couple days so I might not be able to fix everything at once. 웃OO 16:41, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
100cellsman That is fine; the onhold period is for a week anyway. --K. Peake 17:37, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
Kyle Peake All the issues should be fixed now, let me know if I missed anything again. Though I had the personnel listed in alphabetical order. 웃OO 03:20, 25 January 2021 (UTC)Reply
100cellsman Wow that was quicker than I expected; I fixed some areas where you got somewhat mixed up with copy editing and also resolved a number of issues that arose elsewhere. ✓Pass now, the copyvio score is at around 45% but that is due to a part from the source that is quoted from an entirely different one. --K. Peake 06:39, 25 January 2021 (UTC)Reply