Talk:Walter von Bülow-Bothkamp
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Georgejdorner in topic B class review
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B class review
editB class. But please fix the following issues. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 02:38, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
- He served in the Middle East and suddenly he is on the Western Front. I found this confusing. Presumably he made the transfer when he joined Jagdstaffel 18. Please mention the change of theater.
- His brother Harry is listed in the infobox, but he is not mentioned in the body of the article. Please add this information.
- When I see a one-sentence introduction, this says to me: "Not B class". Please expand by adding at least two sentences. (Hints: Scored victories in Mid-East and Western Front. Commanded 2 squadrons. Earned Pour le Merite.)
- All remedied.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:48, 17 April 2021 (UTC)