Talk:Waiting period (Six-Day War)

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This article requires cleanup for the following main reasons:

  • It has spelling and grammatical mistakes
  • It repeats other articles, especially military moves section
  • It includes unsubstantiated claims
  • It requires citation of sources

Amirig 23:58, 7 June 2006 (UTC)Reply

This article falsely implies that Nasser withdrew from Yemen in anticipation of the June War

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The reality is the opposite: Nasser withdrew from Yemen in the aftermath of the June War.[1]

References

  1. ^ "Divided in Defeat". Time. 1967-06-30. ISSN 0040-781X. Retrieved June 8, 2021.

Quoted sentence needs to be in quotation marks

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In the section "Military moves", the sentence

Any military analyst should have recognized that the arrival of large numbers of Arab troops and Iraqi planes in Jordan would inevitably make Israel anxious to swiftly act against Jordan before these new forces were fully deployed.

is a direct quote from source and needs to be in quotation marks.

- 189.122.243.241 (talk) 05:26, 4 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

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Where it says "On 27 May Egypt canceled a planned attack on Israel at the last minute", I think there should be a hyperlink to this Wiki article Operation Dawn (1967) Drsmartypants(Smarty M.D) (talk) 03:50, 29 March 2023 (UTC)Reply

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 10 April 2023

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Change "Meanwhile, Eban went to the United States and met three times with Secretary of State Dean Rusk" to "Meanwhile, Abba Eban went to the United States and met three times with Secretary of State Dean Rusk", adding a hyperlink and first name Werner Zagrebbi (talk) 18:43, 10 April 2023 (UTC)Reply

  Done DRAGON BOOSTER 19:17, 10 April 2023 (UTC)Reply