Talk:United States Capitol cornerstone laying
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Sainsf in topic GA Review
United States Capitol cornerstone laying has been listed as one of the Art and architecture good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: April 15, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:09, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:09, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
Lead
edit- No need to include citations in the lead unless the claims mentioned are really controversial.
- The lead should be expanded by at least a few lines more, it looks too short now.
Background
edit- of the planned capitol building Please mention the name of the building when you begin with the main text
Ceremony
edit- which had been named for him two years earlier We need not mention this, can be cut out.
- Georgetown silver smith Caleb Bentley Should it not be "silversmith"?
- Does "ox" need a link?
I guess that should be all. Well-written and pleasant article. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 12:55, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- Sainsf Sorry for the delay and thanks again for your patience. I believe I've made all these updates now, let me know if I missed something. LavaBaron (talk) 23:00, 14 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks, you have dealt with all the issues. Happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 03:59, 15 April 2016 (UTC)
- Sainsf Sorry for the delay and thanks again for your patience. I believe I've made all these updates now, let me know if I missed something. LavaBaron (talk) 23:00, 14 April 2016 (UTC)