Talk:Tony Terry

Latest comment: 15 years ago by Derek R Bullamore in topic Present status

Structure edit

Article is written in 1st person and asking questions. Sounds like a discussion between friends. Needs to be rewritten with citation of sources (footnotes or related links) and there needs to be subtopics with headings. Panda

NPOV edit

Wikipedia rules state all articles and other encyclopedic content must be written from a neutral point of view (NPOV), representing fairly and without bias all significant views. This article is clearly biased and not neutral. It should be rewritten. Afrolocks 00:50, 19 April 2007 (UTC)Reply

Present status edit

The comments above were vaild - but the article has been sub edited to a far better Wiki standard as of February 2009. However, more references / input would be welcomed.

Derek R Bullamore (talk) 22:54, 6 February 2009 (UTC)Reply