Talk:Timișoara Palace of Culture
Latest comment: 2 years ago by Gikü in topic Clarification
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- There is content in the lead which does not seem to be in the body. See MOS:LEAD: "Apart from basic facts, significant information should not appear in the lead if it is not covered in the remainder of the article." I suggest adding expanded versions of the statements in the lead to the main body of the article. Obviously they will need sourcing.
- Similarly with the infobox.
- The lead is too short.
- Infobox: it seems likely that the organisations listed as "Landlord" are actually the tenants.
Gog the Mild (talk) 16:15, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
- Ping User:Turbojet to help referencing the intro and infobox. I also think the last point is true. Gikü (talk) 17:58, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
Clarification edit
In Special:Diff/1078848444, Turbojet refers to User talk:Gikü/Timișoara Palace of Culture. Thanks. Gikü (talk) 18:01, 26 April 2022 (UTC)