Talk:Teeth (musical)
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Did you know nomination
edit- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Launchballer talk 17:34, 15 May 2024 (UTC)
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- ... that Teeth depicts a young woman's discovery that she has teeth in her vagina? Source: https://www.vulture.com/article/theater-review-jackson-jacobs-teeth.html
Created by Spaghettifier (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.
Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Spaghettifier (talk) 22:47, 24 April 2024 (UTC).
- This is a comment not a review, but doesn't the hook violate WP:DYKFICTION? I do think the hook is interesting, but unfortunately it's focused on a plot point without having a real-world connection. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:18, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- The article is otherwise rather light on other potential hook facts, but this might work as an alternative:
- ALT1 ... that the soundtrack to the 2024 musical Teeth was described as ranging from Christian rock to "an ancient feminine Tori Amos meets Stravinsky pagan ritual music"?
- Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 02:48, 25 April 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Good point – I didn't think about that. I like your alt suggestion though! Spaghettifier (talk) 19:03, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- Broadway World is listed at WP:RSP in red, meaning it can't be used. If it was added to the article, ALT2 ... that Teeth, a depiction of a young woman's discovery that she has teeth in her vagina, has been described as having a "lethal bite" by The New York Times? could work.--Launchballer 09:07, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that The New York Times described "Teeth" as having a "lethal bite"?--Launchballer 16:14, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- ALT3 sounds good! @Spaghettifier: Are you okay with it? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:40, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the suggestion @Launchballer:! Replaced the BroadwayWorld source and added the lethal bite description. I'm thinking one tweak so we still get a sense of what the show is:
- ALT4: ... that The New York Times called Teeth a "feminist awakening with a lethal bite"? Spaghettifier (talk) 23:49, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
I guess, I was going for the quirky angle, but ALT4 checks out. Full review needed.--Launchballer 06:47, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- ALT3 sounds good! @Spaghettifier: Are you okay with it? Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:40, 6 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: Good point – I didn't think about that. I like your alt suggestion though! Spaghettifier (talk) 19:03, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
- The article is otherwise rather light on other potential hook facts, but this might work as an alternative:
- Hello :) allow me to review this
I did some copyediting during my review; feel free to revert changes w/which you disagree. References used are reliable, and I spotchecked the following [1] [2] [3] [4] [5], finding no issues. QPQ done. I think ALT4 is ok PSA 🏕️ (talk) 13:28, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
