Talk:Suze (The Cough Song)

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 10:48, 26 March 2023 (UTC)

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• ... that when recording what became “Suze (The Cough Song)”, Bob Dylan started coughing, then said that the song ended before his coughing started, and asked the producer to fade it out? Source: Margotin, Philippe; Guesdon, Jean-Michel (2022). Bob Dylan All the Songs: The Story Behind Every Track p.108: "Dylan had a sudden coughing fit at 1:30 which led him to ask Tom wilson, his producer, to end the song with fafe-out".
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Created by BennyOnTheLoose (talk). Self-nominated at 21:13, 5 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Suze (The Cough Song); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

• Article was newly created when nominated, and the hook is interesting. QPQ done. Everything checks out.--NØ 16:48, 6 March 2023 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Suze (The Cough Song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

This should be done quickly! --K. Peake 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox and lead

• How long ago dates were does not need to be noted in the infobox

• Fixed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

• The exacty recording date and studio are not sourced anywhere in the body

• Added the details with a source. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:30, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• WP:OVERLINK of Columbia under label(s)
• "during the sessions for" → "during the sessions for his third studio album,"
• "The track was written" → "The song was written"
• "by Dylan and produced by" → "by Dylan, and produced by"
• "started ninety seconds" → "started 90 seconds" per MOS:NUM
• Move the standalone sentence to being in the same para as the rest since this is not enough on its own
• "found the track enjoyable." → "found the song enjoyable."

• Fixed the seven points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

Background and recording

• Add a comma after E tuning
• "ninety seconds into" → "90 seconds into" per MOS:NUM
• "before saying that the song" → "until saying that the song" to avoid using before twice in one sentence

• I amended the article per the three points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• "and the stanza's return." is this definitely about one stanza because if multiple, remove the apostrophe

• Source has "Dylan accompanies the bridge and stanza’s return with harmonica." BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• Pipe Jimmie Tarlton to Darby and Tarlton
• Add double speech marks around "Percy's Song"

• I amended the article per the two points above. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Release and reception

• The tense of reviews needs to be consistent

• Fixed. (Hopefully). BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:39, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Personnel

• Good

References

• Copyvio score is totally non existent!
• Wikilink Columbia Records
• Wikilink Scarecrow Press per MOS:LINK2SECT

• Added the links. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:38, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 20:39, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

• Many thanks, K. Peake. Hopefully I've fixed everything, but let me know if more work is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:41, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, thanks for the response within the expected timeframe of a week! --K. Peake 18:25, 30 August 2023 (UTC)