Talk:Soviet destroyer Stroyny (1940)

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Parsecboy in topic GA Review

GA Review

edit
This review is transcluded from Talk:Soviet destroyer Stroyny/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 00:57, 15 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

I'll take this one as well. Parsecboy (talk) 00:57, 15 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • Same comments as the other review about Stalin and the displacement
  • " expended 2,387 130 mm shells" - similar issue to the other one - I believe the MoS advises against a pair of numerals next to each other. You might just say "2,387 main battery shells" or similar
  • Ditto for the other instances of these

Nice work again. Parsecboy (talk) 14:48, 15 January 2019 (UTC)Reply