Talk:Siege of North Gaza
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Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 8 October 2024
editThis edit request to Second battle of Jabalia has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request. |
- What I think should be changed:
The page name should be change to "Third Battle of Jabalia".
- Why it should be changed:
The Second Battle of Jabalia was in May, it just don't have a wiki page. I'm not an "extended-protected" user so I can't create the article myself, but I don't mind helping.
- References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):
Few reference to the May battle in Jabalia: BBC, reuters, The Guardian.
- Comment:
This artice isn't currently "extended-confirmed-protected", probably should be changed to one. Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 13:37, 8 October 2024 (UTC)
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- Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. M.Bitton (talk) 14:07, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
- @M.Bitton
- I will be more precise.
- I'm requesting to change the page name:
.− Secondbattle of Jabalia+ Third battle of Jabalia- This is actually the third battle to take place in Jabalia. I am currently working on creating a page for the May battle in Jabalia (I have discussed the proposed new article on the talk pages of User talk:Yovt and Talk:Battle of Jabalia).
- As a reference supporting my proposed change, I am citing the following from BBC:
- "This is the third time Israeli forces have gone into Jabalia and its refugee camp over the past year".
- Additionally, this page is still not Extended-confirmed protected, and I would appreciate it if you (or someone else) could "protect" it. Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 07:51, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
- Not done: page moves are not edit requests. Someone else also suggested another title that they will discuss with other extended-confirmed editors. M.Bitton (talk) 12:00, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
- OK, thank you anyway. Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 12:47, 15 October 2024 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 8 October 2024 - update casualties
editIt is requested that an edit be made to the extended-confirmed-protected article at Siege of North Gaza. (edit · history · last · links · protection log)
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- What I think should be changed (format using {{textdiff}}):
Change Israeli casualties to:
Per Israel:
1 soldier killed
Change Palestinian Joint Operations Room casualties to:
Per Israel:
Dozens of militants killed
- Why it should be changed:
Just an update to more recent claims.
- References supporting the possible change (format using the "cite" button):
reuters for "one soldier killed", The Hindu for "Dozens of militants killed".
Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 13:59, 8 October 2024 (UTC)
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Move
editShould this article be moved to “siege of Jabalia camp”? The fighting seems to be going on around there, though it could spillover to Jabalia itself The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 14:37, 12 October 2024 (UTC)
When does it say 12 vehicles are destroyed?
editIt doesnt say that 68.174.61.132 (talk) 02:56, 13 October 2024 (UTC)
Requested move 16 October 2024
edit- The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The result of the move request was: procedural close per WP:CT/A-I. Non-ECP users may not participate in community discussions under these restrictions let alone initiate such a discussion. (non-admin closure) Cinderella157 (talk) 05:06, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
Second battle of Jabalia → Third Battle of Jabalia – It is a battle after the Second Battle of Jabalia, which has no article in the language yet. אורי9 (talk) 07:16, 16 October 2024 (UTC)
Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 23 October 2024
editIt is requested that an edit be made to the extended-confirmed-protected article at Siege of North Gaza. (edit · history · last · links · protection log)
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- What I think should be changed:
Please add Givati Brigade to Israeli "Units involved" under "162nd division".
- Why it should be changed:
This brigade joined the offensive on 18 October.
- References supporting the possible change:
Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 11:06, 23 October 2024 (UTC)
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Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 9 November 2024
editIt is requested that an edit be made to the extended-confirmed-protected article at Siege of North Gaza. (edit · history · last · links · protection log)
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- What I think should be changed:
In the info-box:
− | 1,200+ | + | 1,200+ Palestinians killed |
- Why it should be changed:
The source used claims that 1200 people were killed in north Gaza, but not that 1200 civilians were killed.
- References supporting the possible change:
The current source - [1]
Guy Haddad 1 (talk) 16:32, 9 November 2024 (UTC)
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