Talk:Rufus (Kim Possible)

Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

We need a better picture for Rufus ... he looks like a little pink blob on Kim's shoulder -- ProveIt 18:18, 19 January 2006 (UTC)Reply

  • It might be interesting to start a trivia section once someone's gathered a few interesting factoids - here's one to start the list: Rufus was once confused with Experiment 607 from the Lilo and Stitch TV series.
Yeah, I saw that episode, it might be worth mentioning! =D Jumping cheese 23:59, 5 April 2006 (UTC)Reply

Notability issues

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This article does not establish real-world notability per WP:FICT, WP:WAF, WP:NOT#PLOT, and WP:N. It also features trivia sections and potential WP:OR. The article need to be merged to a general cast of characters article (formerly known as "character lists"); such articles have a better chance of establishing the substantial real-world info required to show encyclopedic notability. Even the list might not be able to establish such notability, so a "transwiki" to a Kim Possible Wikia or Wikia Annex might be better. Deletion can be used as a last resort. — Deckiller 18:00, 25 August 2007 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Rufus (Kim Possible)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:06, 21 April 2020 (UTC) Will be taking on his review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:06, 21 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • "Kim Possible (2002-2007)" - the hyphen should be replaced with an en dash (–) per MOS:DASH
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 05:51, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "who insisted that the animated series required an animal sidekick," - require
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 05:51, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "The character has been called a fan favorite and one of the series' most popular characters." - please state whom exactly called Rufus a fan favorite and one of the show's most popular characters
Fixed; "by reviewers."--Changedforbetter (talk) 05:51, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Role

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  • "during which he sometimes jeopardizes their missions," - please briefly elborate that it is through his actions that jeopardizes the missions
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 05:51, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "typically emerging from Ron's pocket to either offer assistance or eat." - eat food?
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 05:51, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "Ron obtains Rufus because his father is allergic to all animal furs, forcing him to settle for a hairless pet.[9] Ron discovers Rufus on the Internet.[9]" - maybe merge these two sentences into each other?
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 05:51, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Creation and voice

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  • "who insisted that children's animated series" - that all its children's
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 06:02, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "apart from occasional brief episodes focusing on the character that are more gag-oriented." - gag-orientated episodes focusing on Rufus.
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 06:02, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

Reception and impact

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  • "USA Today's Alex Kane cited Rufus among the show's "charming cast" of memorable characters,[32] while the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette's Rob Owen identified Rufus as the show's breakout character." - repetition of Rufus
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 06:07, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "Rufus is considered one of the show's most popular characters and components," - considered by reviewers
Fixed.
  • Also, twice the mention of the word "show" could be avoided
Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 06:07, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "Cartwright's performance earned her a Daytime Emmy Award nomination for Outstanding Performer in an Animated Program at the 31st Daytime Emmy Awards." - add the year the 31st Daytime Emmy Awards was held
Fixed; added.

Am going to place the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:56, 21 April 2020 (UTC)Reply

I've addressed all concerns; awaiting final review/verdict.--Changedforbetter (talk) 06:07, 23 April 2020 (UTC) MWright96Reply
@Changedforbetter: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 07:14, 23 April 2020 (UTC)Reply