Talk:Robert K. A. Gardiner
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Indy beetle in topic GA Review
Robert K. A. Gardiner has been listed as one of the History good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: March 25, 2019. (Reviewed version). |
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-Indy beetle (talk) 21:33, 1 July 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Guettarda (talk · contribs) 14:50, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
This is really nice work Indy beetle. You handled the conflicting and incomplete sources well. It's an important article in an area where Wikipedia's coverage could stand to be a lot better. My only suggestion would be this sentence: His father died when he was two years old, and one of his siblings also died
. It just feels too dry - maybe something like "and one of his siblings died before adulthood". But that's far too minor an issue to stop promotion. Guettarda (talk) 15:40, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Guettarda: Thank you for the review. I have implemented the recommended change. -Indy beetle (talk) 19:52, 23 March 2019 (UTC)