Talk:Right Thoughts, Right Words, Right Action

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@Aria1561:, although many religious and philosophical traditions lay claim to the notion of "right thoughts, right words, and right action", I believe this title is an allusion to the Noble Eightfold Path of Buddhism. I'm surprised there isn't more discussion of this in the sources about the album. Viriditas (talk) 05:48, 1 July 2015 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:34, 9 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

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  • Citations in the lead and the infobox are unnecessary.
  Not done - I left in the citations for the genres. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
  • It is unnecessary to put citations like this: The sun is hot.[1] The sun is not on fire.[1]
  Done - Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
  • Too many short paragraphs in the "Singles" section.
  Done - Fixed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
  • Twitter is largely considered unreliable.
  Done - Twitter sources removed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
  Done - Citations have been added for the notes. Aria1561 (talk) 14:28, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
  • Expand the contraction "can't".
Further explanation needed. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
  • It would be nice if you added an image of the cover of the album under fair use.
I believe the cover already has a fair use rationale within the image's "Summary" section. Aria1561 (talk) 13:01, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
  • Two dead links to the "Gaon" and the "Spotify" websites
  Done Gaon chart dead links fixed. The Spotify ref doesn't contain a dead link. It just requires you to sign in to the Spotify service. It should bring you to the album's streaming page once done. Aria1561 (talk) 13:14, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Thank you very much for reviewing this. :) Aria1561 (talk) 15:37, 10 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
  1. ^ a b Smith The Sun, p. 5

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