ICC decision to not investigate Cast Lead edit

I have removed the paragraph talking about ICC "accepting their petition on the ground that PA is not a legitimate state". I do not see what Regavim had to do with the ICC decision, which seems to have been made independently. The linked article simply quotes Regavim as commenting on the decision, and quotes Regavim's counsel that it had made the same argument as what the ICC made - but this does not mean that the ICC made the argument because of Regavim's submission. I can't find any mention of Regavim anywhere in the discussion elsewhere. Neither this NYT article, nor this Al-Jazeera article mention Regavim in any way. Kingsindian  20:58, 14 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

@Kingsindian: Regavim was the one who sent petition the ICC. The state made a political decision to not do it and Regavim did it instead. Settleman (talk) 08:20, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Actually one of the sources says that the Israeli state avoids direct petitions by preferring to use an NGO like Regavim to do the work. It may be in The Daily Mail (that article has all the hallmarks of being a 'planted' article, by the way.Nishidani (talk) 09:35, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
The NYT article quotes an anonymous source saying that Israel did not deal directly with the ICC but used "proxies", because it did not want to be seen to be associated with the court. Perhaps this is an oblique reference? Perhaps one could simply write this as said in the NYT article. Kingsindian  11:23, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
First, I'm not sure why Jerusalem Post isn't enough. Second, a quick search of "Regavim ICC" bring more results such as this. Settleman (talk) 15:26, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
I did not say the JPost source is wrong, neither is the Haaretz source wrong. Both are simply quoting a lawyer at Regavim saying they submitted an opinion to the ICC. But there is no evidence that the ICC prosecutor statement was in any way influenced by that, which is what the statement in the WP article implied. Kingsindian  15:31, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
"Kaufman, meanwhile, petitioned the ICC this week on behalf of the Regavim advocacy group" and "Regavim, an organization that petitioned the ICC in September ..." I really can't see the problem. Settleman (talk) 15:39, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Yes, you quoted something which I also say. I am not objecting to that. I rewrote the paragraph to remove the implication. Also using the NYT source. Kingsindian  15:49, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
If you (finally) agree they sent it, why put it out of order? first 2011 then 2012! Settleman (talk) 16:02, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Generally I prefer chronological order. However, here the "newspaper order" makes sense, because it is more important that the ICC rejected the probe, than the fact that Regavim sent a petition to the ICC. Also, doing it in this way removes any implication that the prosecutor ruled as he did on the basis of Regavim's petition. If you can find an alternative formulation that does not have this implication, you are free to change it. Kingsindian  16:08, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
What do you mean "there is no evidence that the ICC prosecutor statement was in any way influenced by that"? They needed someone to petition in order to review it. It is like the police needs a complaint to investigate the crime. You are really stretching this. Settleman (talk) 05:21, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
My reasoning was simple: "X was after Y", does not mean "X was because of Y". I was just removing the latter implication. I am not totally happy with your latest edit, because it still contains the implication. However, it is close enough for me to not bother at this point. Kingsindian  10:33, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
The ICC's official communique on the ruling is here. It refers to a list of submissions, which is here. It has "May 2010" at the top, but lists submissions up to October 2010. There is no mention on the ICC site I can find of submissions in 2011. Is there a source independent of Regavim that the ICC even considered their submission? Zerotalk 11:32, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Until this is clarified I've restored KIngsindian's version. The other edit has some idiomatically weird language in any case. What does 'gentle' mean there? (gentile?) Nishidani (talk) 16:51, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Abusive removal of sources never contested as RS edit

All the following edits will be reverted, Settleman. No edit summary is adequate. Rabbis for Human Rights is an organization widely used for information on wiki I/P pages, and your erasure of references to it looks like retribution for the removal of Regavim as a source. Regavim has no such record on wiki pages-

To eliminate a confusion, this is not really a matter of WP:RS. RHR as a source is obviously reliable for statements it made itself. If I say "according to RHR, so and so" and link to its website saying that, it is obviously fine. The issue is rather a matter of weight, whether RHR's criticisms should be included in an article on Regavim. Kingsindian  20:33, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Since RHR analyses in depth in the material elided what Regavim gets, in its view, wrong, it is clearly relevant. As to the removals of sourced material about Regavim's co-founder, I added that just as, as one does normatively, I added material about the The Rebuilding Alliance founder Donna Baranski-Walker, to that article. No one has ever objected to this, since in both cases it is unlikely that these respective people would merit an independent article outside the ones on the organizations they founded. Such removalism is obviously dictated by protective interests rather than based on wiki policy or practice. Nishidani (talk) 20:56, 15 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Saying "never contested" is a lie since you are currently involved in a discussion on Susya where it is contested.
You claim Regavim are Jewish supremacists and RHR are treehugeers thus the former are complete liars and the later always say the truth so though they present both sides of a case, wikipedia can hold only one side. BUT, is it sensible to put criticism from treehugger lawyer website about the fascist one? Like Kingsindian wrote "specific context" should be considered and there is clear conflict of interest here.
For Yehuda Eliahu - you don't write about him but about his settlement which actually has an article. Regavim ------> Yehuda Eliahu -------> Haresha. On The Rebuilding Alliance you wrote about the lady. She has done this, awarded that etc. (BTW, you link has been removed). Settleman (talk) 05:33, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
It is quite relevant to mention that the co-leader of a movement insisting on Palestinian compliance with Israeli laws happens himself to live in an outpost that did not comply with Israeli laws. Sources dealing with Regavim not that and so will we. Nishidani (talk) 07:30, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
You haven't answered about the conflict of interest context. Kingsindian seems to agree it is UNDUE. The Jpost source doesn't even mention Regavim - clearly breach or Original Research. Same as Maan source which mention once Yehuda Eliyahu and then the sentence ""joined hands with Regavim...". To remind you "original research" (OR) is... analysis or synthesis of published material that serves to reach or imply a conclusion not stated by the sources. Settleman (talk) 17:46, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
The Ma'an source joins all the dots noting that Regavim director-general Yehuda Eliyahu lives in one such outpost Haresha, near Ramallah, ....While the Israeli government has supported settlement building in the West Bank for decades, outposts set up by settlers are illegal even under Israeli law.
In short there is not WP:OR infraction whatsoever-.Nishidani (talk) 20:03, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
KIngsindian did not say it was undue. He said the issue is due weight, a different matter, This article like all others in the I/P area is under ARBPIA rules, and you have jusdt broken the fundamental one, by making more than one revert in a day. So revert back and discuss rather than editwar.Nishidani (talk) 17:56, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Reverted the appropriate part. Settleman (talk) 18:26, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
To clarify, I did not say it was undue, I just said the issue was one of weight. Settleman could have technically broken 1RR, since his changing of my ICC text could be technically counted as a revert. But I don't want to get too technical about this, since he could theoretically remove it after 24 hours anyway. How about we leave the text out for the moment to discuss whether it should be included? Kingsindian  18:35, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Regavim position on the Bedouin can probably be found in many other sources. Bringing information from the party that deals with them in court is conflict of interest. (The whole number game is also silly. One side look at the side that show their point, and so does the other side.) Settleman (talk) 18:55, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
You are being incomprehensible.
You removed the Bedouin section because you dislike RHR. Where is the policy justification?
WP:COI is wholly immaterial. Your principle would mean any parties in conflict could never have their conflicts represented on Wikipedia, which is a patently lunatic inference, based neither on policy nor practice.
If you want to be taken seriously, cite policy correctly and cogently. Nishidani (talk) 19:48, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

A suggestion: one could simply quote Regavim's position on Bedouins with some material from this op-ed, and add RHR material, properly attributed after that. Kingsindian  19:55, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

It's simpler than that. I added a Bedouin section, with material from RHR. All settleman needed to do was to add Regavim's own position from Ynet or any such source. Rather than add, adjust build, he wiped out the section. I approve your suggestion, but it is a compromise that requires in commonsense simply that Settleman tweak or build on what I added, since I gave attribution to the RHR source.Nishidani (talk) 20:03, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Reading more about RS, I return RHR. But according to it, Regavim is only BIASed and can be used with atrribution. Will work on text tomorrow. Settleman (talk) 22:04, 16 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Sources - come off it edit

This source is exactly the sort of thing we are not allowed to use in Wikipedia. It is a blog by an anonymous person. We can't judge either the notability or reliability of the author as it is unknown. We can't even qualify it by "according to so-and-so" because we don't know who so-and-so is. Treating it as a source of facts is doubly ridiculous and counter to the rules. Quoting it for something we all know to be severe distortion of the facts (in this case both "research NGO" and "in Israel") is terrible editing (you know who you are). Zerotalk 07:57, 20 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Rearrangement of material edit

I have rearranged the material according the following scheme.

  • Definition, establishment, leadership
  • General work which it does
  • Criticism
  • Particular work which does

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Kingsindian (talkcontribs) 22:44, 14 August 2015‎ (UTC)Reply

I have restored the lead, incorporating a couple of recent changes. The lead should act as a stand-alone summary of the article. See MOS:LEAD. It does not matter if stuff is duplicated, in fact, stuff should in the lead should be duplicated in the article. Kingsindian  13:39, 24 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

No limits to POV Pushing? edit

Huldra, can you explain what did you mean writing: "remove ref which does not add anything, and which is blocked in large parts of the world" & erasing an official source[1] describing Israeli government's position?

The international community considers Israeli settlements in the West Bank illegal under international law, but the Israeli government disputes this.[1][2]

--Igorp_lj (talk) 23:37, 22 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

  1. ^ a b "Disputed territories - Forgotten facts about the West Bank and Gaza strip". Israel Ministry of Foreign Affairs. 2003-02-01. Retrieved 22 August 2015.
  2. ^ "The Geneva Convention". BBC News. 10 December 2009. Retrieved 27 November 2010.
User:Igorp lj: I meant exactly what I say. That "standard" sentence is normally supported only by the BBC source, everything in the sentence is sourced in the BBC-source. So the extra mfa.gov.il-source is unnecessary here; if we are going to bring it, then we *also* have to bring an Palestinian official source, for balance, don´t you think? And like it or not; the mfa.gov.il-pages are blocked in large parts of the world. Huldra (talk) 00:08, 23 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Huldra: No one (here - Israel) needs somebody else to explain its own position (even not reminding an anti-Israeli bias of BBC). You are free to add a Palestinian position if it differs from so called "The international community"'s one.
It'll be interesting to see a list (examples) of these "large parts of the world", despite that I think that it's their own problem, not Wikipedia's one. ):)
Surely, Wiki shouldn't have to indulge them, opposite will be right. --Igorp_lj (talk) 08:26, 23 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
User:Igorp lj: Most of the Arab world, AFAIK. Even Egypt, who has diplomatic relations with Israel, have blocked mfa.gov.il-websites for years. (And before you ask: I absolutely do not agree with that policy.) Huldra (talk) 11:05, 23 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
And why do you want to change standards on this article? You know as well as I do that this sentence is sourced all over with *only* the BBC-ref. You know there was a huge case about this back in the day; do you want to reopen that? Huldra (talk) 11:05, 23 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Huldra: "Most of the Arab world..." :) I'm glad to hear that you "absolutely do not agree with that policy". So I hoped, and - lets do not "indulge them", etc.
It's not about this article only. As I see, such "BBC-only" statement appears in other articles too. So I see a "standard one" as mentioned above (Israeli source for its position, BBC one for "those who doesn't want to see" & for other positions) + others if it's needed. --Igorp_lj (talk) 11:39, 23 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
It is normative for articles re settlements and settlement practices to include that BBC sourced statement, which is in place since 2009. No one questions it, Igorp. As to Alfred, attribution is meaningless, since on both occasions she is citing tertiary sources, and not her own opinion. When you link to articles, plus start putting the reflist template under your edit, otherwise the talk page becomes unreadable.Nishidani (talk) 14:57, 23 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Nishidani: I do not know what is "normative" for you. Any way, it's not an argument as well as "since 2009". What I see is your revert before you entered this discussion. That's the pity, but Huldra was silent. :(
To not waste our time (as it happened with Huldra): I see two options only:
  • my var as above (11:39, 23 August 2015, before your your so authoritarian invasion :), or
  • to agree with removing this part at all, as it's either "off-topic" (Beukford) or "not a settlement" (Settleman).
"As to Alfred, attribution is meaningless..." - I'll check. --Igorp_lj (talk) 12:38, 24 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Can anyone support the claim of 'standard language' for an organization? Settleman (talk) 19:12, 25 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
See below. That's not a quesiton of organisation or settlement. The issue is a question of legality or not :-). Pluto2012 (talk) 20:14, 25 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
See below. :) --Igorp_lj (talk) 21:24, 26 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

False accusation edit

(copy from User_talk:Huldra#False_accusation)

I'd suggest you to check carefully your edit and to make self-revert, with an apology in his description. Otherwise, I will have to apply to another place, including other issues already mentioned to in Talk:Regavim (NGO)#Legal aspects". --Igorp_lj (talk) 22:24, 26 August 2015 (UTC)

--Igorp_lj (talk) 22:26, 26 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Legal aspects edit

It is written in the introduction that:

Regavim['s] mission [is] “to ensure responsible, legal, accountable & environmentally friendly use of Israel’s national lands and the return of the rule of law to all areas and aspects of the land and its preservation”. (bold by me).

and also that:

Regavim focuses most intensely on construction work in (...) West Bank which has been done by Palestinians without Israeli permits. (...)

As a consequence, it seems quite logical to remind that:

the international community considers Israeli settlements in the West Bank illegal under international law, which the Israeli government disputes.

This last point is a legal aspect (under international law) for what Regavim does in West Bank, legally from his point of view. Why is it pointed that what they do is legal and that they attack illegal construction... There is huge nuance. What Regavim supports today is illegal too (for int'l Law). It is forgetten an important point of view on the quesiton of the legality whereas the topic is introduced in two other sentences. Regavim is not KKL.

Wow... The importance of bringing the nuance is even more important from this sentence from journalists: Assuming that Israel’s settlements are legal under international law, Regavim accuses the EU of assisting the Palestinians in an illegal plan to take control of large parts of the West Bank.

Pluto2012 (talk) 20:02, 25 August 2015 (UTC).Reply

Indeed -- NPOV requires that we make it clear that there is more than one view as to what is "legal" in this context. I'm surprised this requires discussion. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 21:23, 25 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Quite. I suspect the only reason this is being discussed at all, is because of the distortions caused by things like this, this and this. So, can someone undo "Settleman", please? (I´ve used my 1RR for today). I also suggest taking any editor who remove this again to WP:AE; they can sanction editors, even if they do not break 1RR. Huldra (talk) 22:56, 25 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Find a source which says that about Regavim and it won't be removed but pretending this is 'standard language' is silly. You were asked to support it but you haven't. Your request above is a 'declaration of war'. Settleman (talk) 04:55, 26 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Stop moving the goal-post. It is standard for settlements, even if the settlement is not mentioned directly. Huldra (talk) 13:09, 26 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Settleman,
I have provided the explanation and even more the source that you require. So what's the problem ? Why don't you act based on that ?
Now that the material was found, if you are here to build an encycopaedia, you will make the change by yourself even if this doesn't fit your own opinion.
If you are here with a hidden agenda, then you will use civil pov-pushing to find excuses or reasons not to do so.
It is up to you to clarify this. Pluto2012 (talk) 05:07, 26 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
If you mean I should help making the article look like this, I will pass. There is no 'standard language'. If you feel something should be added based on normal sources, do it and I'll comment if needed. It is interesting you claim Havakook isn't RS but will support this wild OR edit. Settleman (talk) 05:33, 26 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
It's an excellent example of not-NPOV statements (Pluto2012) and subsequent "plan of action's discussion" of other such editors. IMHO, just it (Huldra) may be interesting to WP:AE. :)
Returning to a point: what's the problem? Regavim does what it writes:
  • “to ensure responsible, legal, accountable & environmentally friendly use" what it regards as Israel’s national lands,
but (!) by legal means, appealing to the Supreme Court - Bagatz.
And this is another example of double standards of those from +972, as well of all of you, who does support such regular appeals of pro-Arab NGOs, and doesn't - of Regavim ones. :)
Someone may like it or not, but a real judiciary on West Bank is Israeli (including Ottoman & British heritage, may be of Jordan's occupation too), but not of tangible "international community". Surely it's not of EU, decided to support one of conflict's parties.
(do not checking yet if these sources are already mentioned in the article)
  • The illegal “building intifada” being waged by the Palestinian Authority on state lands in Area C of Judea and Samaria, (the West Bank), has become the latest battleground for the radical Left in conjunction with foreign-funded Israeli socalled human rights NGO’s such as B’tselem and Bimkom. This unlawful land theft is being carried out with the full support of the EU, foreign aid organizations and the UN. (Briggs, Ari (2012-08-27). "Illegal Arab building defies Supreme Court ruling". jpost.com. Retrieved 26 August 2015.)
  • "Regavim, the right-wing equivalent of Peace Now, says Europe is using an impoverished Bedouin population to create political facts on the ground... Regavim – Israel Independence Fund was founded in 2006 by newly elected Jewish Home MK Bezalel Smotrich and Yehuda Eliyahu in response to a September 2005 Supreme Court case brought by Peace Now against the illegal outpost of Harasha in Samaria"(Miller, Elhanan (May 1, 2015). "Tracking illegal Arab construction, one EU-funded house at a time". timesofisrael.com. Retrieved 26 August 2015.)
  • "Qamar Mashriki Assad, a lawyer from Rabbis for Human Rights, which acts on behalf of the Palestinian villagers of Susya, told Human Rights Watch that Regavim petitioned the Israeli Supreme Court in 2011 to demolish the Palestinian village. The petition came after Rabbis for Human Rights filed a case the previous year urging the Supreme Court to restrain alleged settler violence that prevented Palestinians from Susya from accessing their farmland. The court declared 12 percent of the residents’ land “closed to Israelis...” ("Israel: Court Permits Discriminatory Evictions". Human Rights Watch. 2015-05-19. Retrieved 26 August 2015.)
  • "Regavim Report Show Clear Anti-Settler Discrimination in Israeli Supreme Court". jewishpress.com. 2015-06-14. Retrieved 26 August 2015.
  • Lazaroff, Tovah (2015-08-24). "Settlers take EU to court for funding illegal Palestinian building". jpost.com/. Retrieved 26 August 2015.
--Igorp_lj (talk) 13:21, 26 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Found here WT:Legality of Israeli settlements. The long discussion was very specific. Find a source you are happy with that says that about Regavim instead of this fight. Settleman (talk) 00:15, 27 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
Since you've failed to response to the core issue here -- NPOV and "legality" -- I've not waited for your agreement. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 08:27, 27 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
@Nomoskedasticity: what "the core issue here"? A lot of sources above do prove Regavim's Legal activity by means of its appeals to a Court.
P.S. That's the pity, but some editors do execute what Huldra has proposed at 22:56, 25 August 2015, i.e. edit war thru reverts, instead of discussion.
(if retain this thesis at all) @Huldra: "mfa.gov.il-ref is not needed here. (we would need a Palestinian official to counter it, ok?"
You may bring PNA official as well, but again: it's Israel what should be a main "Israeli source for its position"("+ others if it's needed. --Igorp_lj (talk) 11:39, 23 August 2015") --Igorp_lj (talk) 13:02, 27 August 2015 (UTC)Reply
I'm going to take the view that Pluto's post beginning this section is perfectly clear -- no need for me to repeat it. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 14:58, 27 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Wikipedia:No original research - "To demonstrate that you are not adding OR, you must be able to cite reliable, published sources that are directly related to the topic of the article". Instead of going to a war, find a source that say that about Regavim. Settleman (talk) 16:36, 27 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Nableezy Can you comment on this? I saw you were involved in the original discussion about the text. The way I understand it, that consensus was achieved specifically for articles about settlements which makes this improper use. I obviously don't argue the facts but allowing it here will make this sentence a default for any kind of body, organization, person etc' who deal-with/live/located in the West Bank. Settleman (talk) 20:37, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Huldra Please see User talk:Settleman#WP:BRD. Settleman (talk) 20:40, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Settleman Eh, red-linked?? Huldra (talk) 20:43, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Huldra Corrected. Not to mention, taking 'Standard language' for a specific topic and expand it is bold. Settleman (talk) 20:44, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Settleman Ok, thanks for the correct link. However, this article was created less than a month ago, (11 August 2015‎ ): I really cannot see that it has reached a "stable" state, ever, yet, Huldra (talk) 20:49, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Huldra It is true for both articles. Please self revert and wait for Nableezy's answer. Settleman (talk) 21:07, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Sigh, *which* other article? And you reverted an edit which has been there since 27 August 2015: I see no reason to self-revert here, Huldra (talk) 21:16, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Huldra Duma arson attack Settleman (talk) 21:35, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

The original discussion was about articles on Israeli settlements. But it took me all of 2 minutes to find a source that discusses Regavim's views and also the status of Israeli settlements under international law (BBC, Guardian). That should settle this, no? nableezy - 22:42, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

I did not oppose the facts just wanted to make sure editors don't make 'standard language' for settlements articles into 'global standard language'. The text should be made according to the sources found. Settleman (talk) 05:57, 3 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
I had already given one source here above [ 20:02, 25 August 2015 (UTC) ].
Assuming that Israel’s settlements are legal under international law, Regavim accuses the EU of assisting the Palestinians in an illegal plan to take control of large parts of the West Bank.
Anyway, there is also a consensus for using that generic and neutral sentence giving both pov's on the settlement issue, to prevent edit wars. Anybody who would try to remove this or a part of this can be fairly suspected of pov-pushing despite WP:AGF.
Pluto2012 (talk) 06:24, 3 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Pluto2012, save the threat to yourself. As Nableezy said, the 'standard language' and source was specific for settlements. Extending its use should get consensus. Open an RFC if you wish for it. Otherwise, use a source regarding regavim.
I thought to use the source but (a) it is +972. probably not great for this (b) what do I do with a sentence like "Assuming that Israel’s settlements are legal under international law"??? I have stated several time, find a source that support this and I won't touch it.Settleman (talk) 18:20, 3 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
The source is not +972. The source is Michel Waelbroeck. Pluto2012 (talk) 19:59, 3 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Cutting through the discussion above, is there something wrong with the Guardian source given by Nableezy? It discusses this issue. It links the two explicitly: "Regavim describes its mission as using the courts “to protect national lands and properties and prevent foreign elements from taking over the countries [sic] territorial resources” and pursued this case despite the fact that Kirbet Susiya is not in Israel but in the occupied Palestinian territories." Kingsindian  09:24, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Kingsindian, it doesn't support the current text as it is. As I have stated repeatedly, write text based on a source and I'll have no objection. If it slides through here, in a week it will be on every person who ever lived or even visited in the West Bank. Claiming it is 'standard language' is nothing but violation of WP:GOODFAITH. Settleman (talk) 10:04, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
I don't understand your last sentence (what does "it will be on every person..." mean?) Some amount of paraphrasing is unavoidable for quoting a source. I agree that the "standard sentence" is simply for settlements. But the source is basically stating the same thing, in a different language. I have rephrased it, let me know if you have more issues here. Kingsindian  10:47, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Both the BBC and the Guardian sources say the Israeli settlement is illegal under international law, and the BBC one goes further and says all Israeli settlements are. nableezy - 12:48, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
I do not understand Nableezy's comment, nor Nomoskedasticity's revert. What "the Israeli settlement" are you talking about? The Guardian source is talking about Regavim's activities in the West Bank, which is the issue here. Everything in the West Bank is occupied under international law, whether or not it is part of an Israeli settlement. In this sense, what I wrote was even broader than what the BBC says. Kingsindian  13:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
On reflection, I agree -- lack of fit. But the whole point of this talk-page section is that NPOV requires that we not simply convey Regavim's self-portrayal as "upholding the rule of law"; insofar as they are operating in the West Bank, their own self-portrayal in this respect needs balancing with the view that the occupation is illegal (thus not the "rule of law") in international law. How we do that remains to be worked out precisely, but not doing something along these lines is not an option. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 13:29, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
The main issue is the intepretation of law. For instance, the ICJ ruled the West Bank wall illegal, while the Israeli high court didn't (there are various reasons for it, a good discussion which I read was by Norman Finkelstein, Knowing Too Much, Appendix, "Illiberal Liberalism"). Regavim wants the law as interpreted by the Israeli courts to be applied, while the others naturally apply international law in occupied territories. Regavim has succeeded in some cases in the Israeli courts on this basis. This is the crux of the matter, and this is why I added the sentence. Kingsindian  14:03, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
@Kingsindian: I meant to say - next, someone put it on Uri Ariel article or Binyamin Netanyahu. There is no argument the fact is true or that the source is OR as it doesn't mention Regavim. The discussion in which the sentence was crafted had a fine result but pretending it is generic 'standard language' and not specific to settlements is dishonest. Settleman (talk) 15:13, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Whatever. What we need is NPOV. How to accomplish that is open to discussion. But deleting any/every mention of the alternate view on legality (the one that Regavim would surely like to ignore) is not an option. Nomoskedasticity (talk) 15:44, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Nobody prevented you from bringing a source that actually said it about Regavim. As for NPOV, this how one editor sees it.

Regavim (רגבים) is an Israeli NGO, one that, according to its critics, is described as a 'settler-colonial NGO'.[1] It describes itself as pursuing “the return of the rule of law to all areas and aspects of the land and its preservation.” The word 'land' refers to 'Jewish national land.'[1]Critics argue that Regavim aims to 'try to force the state to speed up and increase the execution of home demolition orders and forced relocations of non-Jews, be they of Palestinians in the West Bank or Bedouin in the Negev.'[2] It was founded by Yehuda Eliahu, a functionary of the Mateh Binyamin Regional Council, and its objectives converge with those of Israeli settlers, with whom the group maintains close institutional ties.[3]

Great Lead, ha??? Settleman (talk) 15:55, 4 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
This is the result of your pov pushing and the climate you put on these articles. Pluto2012 (talk) 07:23, 20 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Sentence about settlements being illegal under international law edit

I have removed this for now. As evident by the edit-warring since it was added, there is no consensus to add this for now.See WP:ONUS. There does not seem to be any discussion on the talk page about why it should be added. Please discuss it here, instead of edit-warring. Kingsindian  21:22, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Oops, I see the above section is dealing with this. Kingsindian  21:26, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

You are an angel! (and then I saw you deleted your message :(
I will repeat my arguments from the previous discussion. WT:Legality of Israeli settlements was a lengthy discussion which ended with 'standard language' for all settlements. The BBC source then makes it right-to-the-point with no need to find a source for every place. But that consensus was achieved specifically for those articles and dropping it here is improper use. I obviously don't argue the facts but allowing it here will make this sentence a default for any kind of body, organization, person etc' who deal-with/live/located in the West Bank and that is a very different discussion. Settleman (talk) 21:34, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
I suggest continuing here in regard of extending the role of 'standard language'. Settleman (talk) 21:36, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
I have no to add smthng to my prev. one:

 P.S. That's the pity, but some editors do execute what Huldra has proposed at 22:56, 25 August 2015, i.e. edit war thru reverts, instead of discussion.
    (if retain this thesis at all) @Huldra: "mfa.gov.il-ref is not needed here. (we would need a Palestinian official to counter it, ok?"
    You may bring PNA official as well, but again: it's Israel what should be a main "Israeli source for its position"("+ others if it's needed. --Igorp_lj (talk) 11:39, 23 August 2015") --Igorp_lj (talk) 13:02, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

--Igorp_lj (talk) 23:50, 2 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
I would rather state that Igorp_lj has started an attrition war based on civil pov pushing.
The rationale has been explained and no fair argument given not to state the usual sentence referring to both the International Law and the Israeli government concerning the legacy or not of the settlements in West Bank.
@Huldra :
Regarding references to MFA, I think we should keep the link given it is said in the sentence that Israeli disputes the position of the international community. It has an added value as a primary source supporting the statement of a secondary one.
Pluto2012 (talk) 05:54, 3 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
As I've mentioned above (11:39, 23 August 2015), it's not my war. :(
Btw: a current variant (on Guardian), with corresponded attribution, seems me ok. --Igorp_lj (talk) 16:28, 5 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
@Igorp lj: It is defiantly not just Bedouins. Negev is Bedouins, West Bank is both Bedouins and Palestinians and for Galilee my guess is Israeli Arabs. Then there is the report about the settlements. Current 'Israeli Arabs' is wrong. I woulkd suggest either 'Arabs' or 'minorities'. Settleman (talk) 16:46, 5 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Huh? How can anyone say "per Nableezy, as, from my understanding, he argues exactly opposite? Huldra (talk)

The original discussion was about articles on Israeli settlements. Settleman (talk) 08:18, 6 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Which is basically Regavims raison d'être, no? Huldra (talk) 23:50, 6 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Can you place it on a map? It isn't Regavim. Settleman (talk) 06:48, 7 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
The fact that Regavim is not a settlement but is a NGO is not a matter here.
The reasons to give both the pov of the International Law and Israel is to comply with NPoV and the wording that are used were based on discussions to avoid edit wars on the topic.
It is relevant here given Regavim (NGO) defends the point of view of the settlers and emphasize the legal aspects.
That's totally obivous. I add that you asked for a source that was talking about Regavim in this context and you was provided by me here above. I will not write this a 3rd time.
Pluto2012 (talk) 05:28, 9 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Sorry for confusion about two section about the same topic (my fault). But see my rephrasing of the basic issue here, which was slightly modified by Igorp_lj, but essentially kept. I think this is acceptable by all? If not let me know. Kingsindian  10:31, 9 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
You don't need to write anything, we have gone through these circles before. This statement is true but you need a source that says it directly about Regavim otherwise it is OR. Settleman (talk) 18:16, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
No, that is not needed. Regavim introduce the topic of legality itself.
But anywya, you are making polite pov-pushing given that source has already be given here above.
Here is another one: It's an international and EU interest to protect the viability of the two state solution. If some people are complaining about this, we should not forget the illegal Israeli settlements that are built on occupied Palestinian territory and are illegal under international law and constitute an obstacle to peace.'
Pluto2012 (talk) 19:08, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

@Pluto2012 and Huldra: I have removed the sentence for now, because as yet, there is no consensus for including it. I had already rewrote the boilerplate language about settlements, to include the Guardian source saying the same thing: that Regavim targets what it calls "illegal constructions" in the West Bank, which is occupied Palestinian territory under international law. The sentence from the Neve Gordon source also talks about this. I do not see why we need to include this boilerplate statement again in the lead. Kingsindian  19:16, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

And here is another source (Algemeneir) that says exactly the same: The settlements themselves are not recognized under international law, though Israel disputes these claims.
Pluto2012 (talk) 19:21, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
User:Kingsindian; I don´t follow you here. We get Regavim POV in the lead (which is ok: this is the article about them)..but we really need *also in the lead* a clear message that this is not the way the international community sees it, Huldra (talk) 20:49, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
@Huldra: I thought this was what I did when I added the Guardian reference. That settlements are in violation of international law is because the West Bank is occupied under international law. See my comment in the previous section. Kingsindian  21:07, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
I think that in the strictest technical sense, one needs some generic statement of the kind:' The settlements themselves are not recognized under international law, though Israel disputes these claims' in a source article where Regavim is mentioned in that connection, so as to avoid WP:SYNTH. This may be a rather anal reading of RS, and one, I would note, which would, were it applied to Susya, mean that those passages where Havakkuk doesn't specifically mention Susya while dealing with herder seasonal cultures, would equal violate the principle. But we go by context and consensus in these matters. I think we should try for the high bar here, and only allow the generic statement if Regavim is there in the context.Nishidani (talk) 21:20, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Firstly, I couldn´t find the Guardian-source, as it was mis-labeled Observer (fixed now). And secondly: "That settlements are in violation of international law is because the West Bank is occupied under international law" might be blindingly obvious to us, but it is *not* blindingly obvious to any casual reader of this article. Therefore I would like it in. Huldra (talk) 21:22, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
The Observer and Guardian are roughly the same: they are put out by the same company, and are very similar. The Observer is even hosted on the Guardian website. Anyway, one could use the Daily Mail link (I hate using Daily Mail, one could probably find something else). The basic issue as listed there, is that the international community considers West Bank to be occupied, and this is used to support construction in Area C by Palestinians, while Regavim/Israel see any attempt to support construction there as an attempt to "change facts on the ground" in favour of the Palestinians. This really needs more detail, and should be included in the Israeli Civil Administration, as well as the stub Area C (West Bank) article I created but don't have time to expand. One could mention something of this in the lead, as long as there is a direct connection shown with Regavim. Kingsindian  21:56, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
@Kingsindian:
I think the link is made thanks to Neve Gordon but even without him we should have mentionned the Int'l Law position on this article. The strategy of Regavim is to mirror attacks against settlements to denounce double standards. Here, they want it is stated EC do not respect Int'l Law (Oslo agreements) in reaction to the fact they are accused not to respect Int'l Law. This issue is therefore in the context and cannot be avoided. ( Settlements are illegal by Int'l Law -> Settlers create Regavim to defend their rights -> They develop a mirroring strategy -> Regavim sue EC (read: Int'l community) because it acts illegally ). Pluto2012 (talk) 07:30, 20 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

@Nishidani: Big difference. In Susya the chapter is about the Arabs in the region which 'susyans' are part of, here the paragraph has nothing to do with Regavim. If there was an article about cave dwellers in SHH, it could just be linked but since there isn't, I'm not sure why neutral, historic information causes such resistance.
If Huldra thinks there should be a 'standard language' she can drop whenever she feels it fits, she should start WT like it was done back when so the text can be agreed on and more important, when and where it can be used. Good night. Settleman (talk) 22:07, 19 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
Interesting diversion. So direct sources were provided, once more. Pluto2012 (talk) 07:15, 20 September 2015 (UTC)Reply
So use them! Settleman (talk) 08:32, 20 September 2015 (UTC)Reply

Duplicate edit

duplicate.

It is not clear what the lines remove 'duplicate', Epson Salts. So could you clarify?Nishidani (talk) 09:38, 11 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

anybody who reads the article, let alone someone who claims to edit texts for a living, can clearly see that this information about the funding already exists in the article, in the first section ("Origins"). Epson Salts (talk) 13:58, 11 September 2016 (UTC)Reply

Under the critisism section, on sentence is doubled tripled:

Critics argue that Regavim aims to "try to force the state to speed up and increase the execution of home demolition orders and forced relocations of non-Jews, be they of Palestinians in the West Bank or Bedouin in the Negev".[12] Critics described it as a "settler-colonial NGO".[16] They argue that Regavim aims to "try to force the state to speed up and increase the execution of home demolition orders and forced relocations of non-Jews, be they of Palestinians in the West Bank or Bedouin in the Negev".[12]

and once more in the paragraph directly below. Somebody with editing permission could please remove this. Best, --155.158.130.1 (talk) 10:26, 6 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Done. Zerotalk 13:08, 6 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Critism edit

Looking at the sources in the criticism, it is quite POV. it is essentially just quotes from a few number of people, i.e. Neve Gordon (pro-BDS) and his colleague, Nicola Perugin, and opinion pieces from Ilene Prusher. we need some actual RS's from news article. Otherwise everything requires an in-text attribution. I will work on this, but welcome the help. PasterofMuppets (talk) 16:16, 20 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

There are no non-POV sources in this area. Attribution in general is good, but your comment is rather weird. What makes you think that a book published by Oxford University Press isn't RS but newspaper articles are? Kingsindian   16:46, 20 December 2017 (UTC)Reply
I did not say the book wasn't a RS, I said we also need some RSs from news articles. Basing all the criticism of an organization on the thoughts of four people is absurd. Of course there are non-POV sources in this area: newspaper articles citing broad criticism. I will work on finding these sources. PasterofMuppets (talk) 07:55, 21 December 2017 (UTC)Reply
Ok, I misread your comment then. You are free to find other sources on the topic, but reliable sources are not required to be unbiased. Newspapers are typically reliable for statements made by officials (the statements themselves can be right or wrong). For broader commentary one usually relies on scholarly sources. See this. Newspaper op-eds can be used in some cases if the author has some claim to expertise. Kingsindian   09:01, 21 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

Criticism section edit

The criticism section basically sites two people, and from them make generalizations. I will be working to clean up this section, and well as toward adding a "Support" section. Regavim is a well-respected NGO in Israel and receives a fair amount of support, notably from the government. PasterofMuppets (talk) 12:21, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

You are right that the criticism section is weak. It should be expanded with more sources to balance the enormous bias that this article has towards Regavim's point of view. Much of the article is just a dump of Regavim's claims. Zerotalk 12:34, 24 January 2021 (UTC)Reply

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 31 October 2023 edit

Please remove the errant ref tag from the third bullet in the Accusations against the European Union in illegal construction section. Thank you. 76.14.122.5 (talk) 02:56, 31 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

  Done Thanks! TechnoSquirrel69 (sigh) 05:56, 31 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request, 2024-03-28 edit

The following text appears in the lede.

It sees its own mission as one of ensuring "responsible, legal, accountable and environmentally friendly use of Israel's national lands and the return of the rule of law to all areas and aspects of the land and its preservation".

The citation for the quotation leads to a 404. I was not able to find an archived version. The text no longer appears on Regavim's new about page. Please remove this text from the article along with the broken citation.

As a side note, if a quotation from the new about page were to be included, the introduction to the quote should be changed to "It has described its own mission as..." and not "It sees its own mission as...". It's not appropriate for Wikipedia to assert that the publicly stated motives of an organization are in fact the views it holds internally; we should instead just report its public claims as such. 184.148.29.202 (talk) 02:46, 28 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

  Done and added information from new about page. Liu1126 (talk) 12:39, 28 March 2024 (UTC)Reply