Talk:Protestant church music during and after the Reformation

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Epiphyllumlover in topic Questions to article in draft state

Questions to article in draft state edit

Without wanting to change too much, I make notes of things I believe are unclear or should be changed for other reasons, in no particular order, and feel to free to comment under each item:

  • The key words in the lead - regulative and normative need a link and/or an explanation.  Y
  • Headers are often too long, and should be sentence case.  Y
  • Once "Protestant Reformation" is established, use only "Reformation" - which is our article anyway.  Y
  • Try more factual images. Better an image of the Theses, than the "hammering" which is some artist's invention.
  • Vatican is a place, - probably the church which came to be called Catholic is meant.  Y
  • What are "spoken songs"? Y
  • In the beginning, it was Lutheran rather than more general Protestant, - please differentiate.  Y
  • Link a term only once.  Y
  • Avoid "Roman Catholic", - our article is Catholic Church.  Y

More to come, perhaps tomorrow. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:59, 23 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

I handled a few, marked  Y. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:05, 24 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Checked one more.--Epiphyllumlover (talk) 23:25, 25 March 2020 (UTC)Reply

Changing article name edit

I think it could be moved to "Church music during the Reformation"--this is shorter than "Protestant Church music during the Reformation" and relies on the assumption that "Reformation" assumes Protestantism given the context. I want to know how others feel about this though before I do anything.--Epiphyllumlover (talk) 23:22, 25 March 2020 (UTC)Reply