Talk:North Carolina Highway 132
Latest comment: 3 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review
North Carolina Highway 132 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: March 13, 2021. (Reviewed version). |
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:46, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- "entirely ... entire..." repetitive.
- Reworded it as "The highway follows College Road for the duration of its route." Does the "the, the" make it too repetitive though?--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
- Not seeing it listed at College Road.
- "of I-40 from" overlinked.
- "Length 15.1 mi[1] (24.3 km)" table says 15.3 mi.
- That was an oversight of mine, apologies. It has been changed.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
- "centers present alongside" not sure "present" adds anything.
- "NC 132 approaching Shipyard Boulevard in Wilmington." fragment, no period required.
- "70,500 cars" cars or vehicles?
- Yeah it should be vehicles, the article might have said cars and I just had that in my head. I changed it.--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
- "NC 132 and US 117 running concurrently in Kings Grant." no period.
- "Castle Hayne.[7][1][3]" order.
- "March 17th, 2003" no "th".
- "the limited-access divided freeway from " WP:SEAOFBLUE and you could link freeway the first time you use it.
- Linked freeway in the lead. I also consolidated the entire phrase under Limited-access road as that should provide a proper link (given most limited-access roads are freeways and are divided). Is that okay or should I just link limited access?--Ncchild (talk) 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
That's it on a first run through. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:53, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
- Ok, happy with this, so promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 21:10, 13 March 2021 (UTC)