Talk:Moxie Sozo

Latest comment: 11 years ago by VintageWiki in topic Advertisement tag

Retribution edit

Deleted at least once in the last 24 hours.

ttonyb1 (talk) 22:29, 5 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

This page recognizes companies of the cutting edge of the green movement, as well as social-responsibility. If marking it as spam, please note: StrawberryFrog and Crispin Porter + Bogusky. These are both similar postings, if not only promotional pieces.--Jhamel22 (talk) 23:36, 5 December 2008 (UTC)User:Jhamel22Reply

In editing the article, I removed content I considered to be promotional (and is often seen as a flag for lack of notability). The other articles you listed include several well-known mainstream sources as references; with the claims you're making in this article, I think having some known independent sourcing would help. Flowanda | Talk 23:53, 18 December 2008 (UTC)Reply
The fact this article has been deleted four times this month is not a good sign. http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Special:Log&page=Moxie_Sozo Flowanda | Talk 04:35, 19 December 2008 (UTC)Reply

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I have removed content and adjusted voice to achieve a more neutral POV. I also added an additional source. Please let me know if I can take further steps. --VintageWiki (talk) 00:49, 10 November 2012 (UTC)Reply