Talk:Mohammad Jafar Mahallati

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Tallowbreeched in topic Bias in Accusation section

Bias in Accusation section edit

The 3rd and 4th paragraphs of the accusation section (in particular the 3rd) seem as though they may have been written from a biased perspective. Both paragraphs attempt to argue that Dr. Mahallati is guilty. I think these sections provide interesting information but it would be good if it were re-written in a more neutral manner. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ianhi7919 (talkcontribs) 04:59, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Currently it seems to be garbled with with irrelevant information. I don't know if it could be arguing that the subject is guilty while it is largely unclear what he is or isn't guilty of: "having a role" isn't helpful to anyone. It's evident that Amnesty International wrote a lot of letters, but frankly all that is evidence of is that Amnesty International wrote a lot of letters. I've tagged the section as unclear for this reason.--Paultalk❭ 08:39, 12 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
After going through the sources cited, few of them actually say what the article is saying. It's seeming like a violation of WP:NOR. Not sure though, second pair of eyes? Tallowbreeched (talk) 21:12, 27 October 2021 (UTC)Reply
After looking at it again, I re-wrote this section to reflect what more reliable sources are saying. Many of those sources were primary documents and was definitely a violation of WP:NOR. I also directly cited what the claims were of Mahallati and the protestors, so I removed the unclear banner.Tallowbreeched (talk) 15:09, 5 November 2021 (UTC)Reply