Talk:Marjorie Ziff

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Hi Mshfc Thanks for all your great work at the wikithon today! This page is such a great start. I've put some suggestions below for ways to improve it, while it's waiting to be reviewed. It might seem a lot, but lots of it is Wikipedia convention (that you just get used to):

1. It's good to put her name in bold at the start
2. The first couple of sentences at the top don't neccessarily need a reference, as they act as a summary of the rest of the article
3. You might want to add a heading like 'Career' above the detail about her work
4. You could add another heading 'Honours' wot discuss her MBE
5. There's quite a lot of sources she's mentioned in, but these seemed interesting:

 *Says how long they were married
 *Mentions she opened the Merrion Centre
 *Detail on Leeds Piano Competition

1. You could probably add a section on buildings named after her and her husband too - there's one at the University, a gallery at Leeds Art Gallery, the cafe (?) at Tropical World.

Thanks for making such a great start on it - if this all seems a bit much, I'm really happy to help get it ready for publication, just let me know! (You can do that by clicking reply next to my name to the right.) Lajmmoore (talk) 19:55, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

Son Edward Ziff

... might be notable enough for an article - OBE and DL: https://www.westyorkshirelieutenancy.org.uk/deputylieutenants/Ziff-E/ PamD 07:14, 15 April 2023 (UTC)