Talk:María Teresa Cano

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Nstrathman in topic Eric Peer Review

Eric Peer Review

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Hi Eric!

I really like your sandbox!

Here are some pointers as you continue to add more info:

°In the art works section, you did a good job of explaining what the piece itself is but towards the end, it seemed like the wording was more bias leaning. It might help to say, "some of the criticism surrounding this piece includes..." or something along those lines so it is more apparent that it was someones option of it but doesn't implicate that that was everyones reception of it.

°The Exhibition portion of your sandbox was very well written! I definitely felt like I was reading a wikipedia article.

°While finding more information on particular artists can be hard, it would help to maybe add a section that goes over the artists background, possible influences, or projects they might be working on.

°More sources would be helpful as well.

°Overall its a great first draft, thanks for letting me review! Let me know if you have any questions or if I can help with anything else.

Bcast014 (talk) 23:47, 15 May 2019 (UTC)Reply


You seriously need more content starting with the biography and ending with the sources. You also need to format this correctly. If you are unsure, then re-watch the training or ask Shalor to help. Nstrathman (talk) 06:20, 22 May 2019 (UTC)Reply