Talk:Kerstin Mogull

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Johnbod in topic Aiming for neutral tone

Conflict of interest

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The author of this article has declared they work for Tate. The subject is undoubtedly notable, but it is written in a somewhat promotional tone, that is likely a result of this COI. Note there were also minor copyright issues, but I did have to revdel. TonyBallioni (talk) 15:26, 10 January 2018 (UTC)Reply

Aiming for neutral tone

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I have made some minor edits in an attempt to rectify any perceived promotional tone. Any advice on this appreciated. Hilaryknight (talk) 22:15, 15 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Hilary mentioned this article to me. It now seems pretty neutral, the subject is notable, so I can't see any benefit in keeping the COI tag, which I will remove. But say here if anyone objects. Johnbod (talk) 16:03, 11 July 2019 (UTC)Reply