Talk:Jerry's Painting

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Varlaam in topic Usted
Good articleJerry's Painting has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starJerry's Painting is part of the Parks and Recreation (season 3) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
May 6, 2011Good article nomineeListed
July 21, 2011Good topic candidatePromoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 9, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that "Jerry's Painting", an episode of the NBC comedy Parks and Recreation, features a painting with a topless centaur Greek goddess that resembles the lead character, played by Amy Poehler?
Current status: Good article

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Jerry's Painting/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Will review this tomorrow. Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Comments edit

Plot edit

  • ...while thinking of about powerful women... Drop "of" or "about".

Production edit

  • "Jerry's Painting" was written by Norm Hiscock and directed by Dean Holland. During its original broadcast, "Jerry's Painting" ran for... Start the second sentence with "the episode" instead.
  • "Jerry's Painting" featured a guest appearance by Darlene Hunt as Marcia Langman, a member of the conservative group, the Society for Family Stability Foundation. Drop the second comma.
  • Remember to write (pictured) after the name of the person in the picture.

Cultural references edit

  • ...Andy and April instead start to purchase several "as seen on TV", including... Looks like a noun is missing after "as seen on TV", unless that is the noun?
    • Nope, you're right. Added "items". — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Reception edit

  • You should probably explain what the "ratings" and "shares" mean, for those who are not familiar with Nielsen ratings.
  • Why Leslie Knope mentioned by full name in the middle of the section?
    • Not sure. Dropped the last name. — Hunter Kahn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Lead edit

With not much at all to complain about, this is overall a very well-written article. Just fix said issues and we've got ourselves another GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that the changes can be made. Queenieacoustic (talk) 09:08, 6 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Usted edit

Why does April mispronounce the word usted when it's established the character speaks Spanish?
Varlaam (talk) 21:05, 14 May 2012 (UTC)Reply