Talk:HMS Bellerophon (1907)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 09:02, 20 February 2017 (UTC)

This article is in great shape. I only have a few quibbles:

• the draught doesn't match between the body and infobox
• the crew infobox upper limit isn't supported in the body
• KC probably doesn't need the initialisation, as it isn't used again
• the lower range on the bulkheads in the infobox doesn't seem to be supported by the body?
• the upper range of deck armour in the infobox doesn't seem to match the body?
• What is the relevance of On 10 March 1914, Temeraire was transferred to the 4th Battle Squadron (BS)? She hasn't been mentioned before. Also BS should probably be specified after its first usage with 1st BS.
  • Stupid computer
• Re: 17 and 20 July. Probably worth re-stating 1914, especially if the Temeraire reference above it is deleted
• probably worth specifying that the High Sea Fleet was German
  • There's a reference to the German raid earlier in the sentence, which should be enough of a link, I think.
• Shetland Islands should be linked
• St Vincent isn't linked and should be prefixed with ship type. Also, relevance.
  • Even more stupid computer.
• File:HMS Agincourt in the North Sea 1915.jpg isn't very likely to have been taken by a USN employee, RN far more likely.
  • Could be, could also be by a naval attaché on a training exercise. No way to tell. But we had this discussion about the photo of the 1st BS on exercise already.

That's me done.

• • Thanks for the catching all these nits.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:08, 21 February 2017 (UTC)