Talk:Gordon Weisenborn

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 29 January 2019 and 7 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Ehenricks.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 21:54, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Review

This is a start, but needs much more with regards to the bibliography and crafting a compelling lead and entry on the filmmaker Gordon Weisenborn. Consider using sources like the Academic Film Archive of North America, or Chicago Film Archives, both of which have Wiesenborn's works in their collections. Consider also Geoff Alexander's book on Academic Filmmaking and articles on Weisenborn and his films in the Chicago Tribune and New York Times. AmyDeer (talk) 02:48, 7 March 2018 (UTC)

Review

The way you editing the references is clear and reliable. I think you need more informations from the artists, like, career, artists's art pieces, now is good~ (talk)

Review

Citations As of now, the article has an average of 1 citation every other sentences, and there are certain sentences that do need their own citation because they don't have a clear connection to the following sentence. It is strong in how many references you have, they just need to be cited more frequently.
Content Gaps The article is pretty succinct, although it still needs more information. The article feels like it doesn't have enough information still to garner notability. It is dense with information, so it would help to draw it out a little more too.
Organization The lead is a good overview of Weisenborn, but the Career section's order is confusing, either it needs to be broken down and reordered under subsections, or it should be ordered to go in chronological order.
(SJCribbs (talk) 13:57, 12 March 2019 (UTC))