Geoffrey's knighthood

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The article does not say when Sir Geoffrey received his knighthood.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 09:20, 5 February 2011 (UTC)Reply

Clarity of Marriage and issue section introductory sentence

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"He married Anne Hoo (1424–1484), the only child and heiress (by his first wife Elizabeth Wychingham) of Thomas Hoo, Baron Hoo and Hastings (c.1396–1455), a Knight of the Garter, by whom he had two sons and five daughters" is grammatically correct but contains so many appositive phases as to obscure which details belong to which person.Threeorange (talk) 07:01, 9 January 2021 (UTC)Reply