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I've fixed most of the notes you've left so far. Sorry for the messy punctuation. I'll fix it throughout the unreviewed sections as well. IXCat (talk) 17:22, 18 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Please change the infobox recording date to simply 2015 since Summer is not a recording month
Remove overly obvious wikilinks on major world cities in London and Paris
"It was produced in Malibu by" → "Production was done in Malibu by"
I think you should merge the string arrangement player into the same sentence as the other musicians, also you do not need a comma before and in British English
"in November 1969, the original picture" → "in November 1969; the original picture"
The maximalist production needs to be written out and sourced in the body
The lead is not only slightly disordered, the information is also lacking for enough paragraph sentences – please make the singles a full sentence for the album in the last sentence of the second para
Start a new sentence at the meanwhile part, although Colour of the Trap is not mentioned by the source
Start a new sentence at "This reminded" to avoid a run-on
"with it as well."" → "with it as well"." per MOS:QUOTE
"Kane's apartment in London, Paris, and" → "Kane's apartments in London, Paris and"
"which they said was "the oldest song in the album"," → "which the Last Shadow Puppets said was "the oldest song" in the album," per where the source uses the quotes
"The album art consists" → "The art for Everything You've Come to Expect consists"
Remove wikilink on New York City, although this is not sourced unless the vrt ref has it mentioned in the audio?
Per the source, mention that he gave it a gold tint for a colour scheme and contemporary feel that resonates more
Change to simply Bowie
"artwork 2016. The prize was organised by" → "artwork 2016, a prize that was organised by"
"as the band thought" → "as the Last Shadow Puppets thought" plus the sentences using direct quotes need the ref(s) invoked, also why is Under the Radar at the end when it only backs up the first sentence?
"Turner has also described" → "Alex Turner has also described"
"on the album sparked by a tweet from arranger Owen Pallett, album producer James Ford stated" → "on Everything You've Come to Expect sparked by a tweet from Pallett, Ford stated"
"with other shots of the band." → "with other shots of the Last Shadow Puppets." plus there is more synopsis from the NME ref that you can add here
"On 21 January, the band announced their album" → "On 21 January 2016, the Last Shadow Puppets announced Everything You've Come to Expect"
Retitle to Singles, as they were all these with videos released
"The lead single, "Bad Habits", was released on 10 January 2016 alongside" → "The album's lead single, "Bad Habits", was released on 10 January 2016, alongside" with this wikilink instead
Pipe cinemascope to CinemaScope and add info about the synopsis briefly per sourcing
"Although, "Everything You've Come to Expect" was first released on March 10," → "Although, "Everything You've Come to Expect" was first released on 10 March 2016,"
"a deserted Californian beach."" → "a deserted Californian beach"." per MOS:QUOTE
Merge with the below section and retitle to Tours and other performances
Remove overly obvious wikilink on Europe
"Mexico, and Japan." → "Mexico and Japan." per the refs being too many jumbled together, please move some to earlier in the sentence for the relevant countries
"opening performance, and the Last Shadow Puppets" → "opening performance and the Last Shadow Puppets"
"In March and April they announced" → "In March and April 2016, the band announced"
"During the tour they were" → "During the tour the Last Shadow Puppets were" but only Alexandra Savior is sourced
Mention what the Aggregator AnyDecentMusic? gave the album in prose
"nature, and wrote that the album "improves over time."" → "nature and wrote that it "improves over time"." per MOS:QUOTE – please fix these issues throughout this section when they are not full sentences quoted
"said "The album is" → "said "the album is" and invoke the ref at the end per direct quoting
Put some of The Line of Best Fit review into your own words per WP:OVERQUOTE and also italicize the title Everything
The NME review is confusing; this starts a new quote at the "provoke" part inside a quote anyway, please put more into your own words and remove wikilink on NME
Only use Pallett's surname here
"full-time band," but overall" → "full-time band", but overall" plus re-invoke the ref at the first sentence for Telegraph
"thought the album was" → "thought Everything You've Come to Expect was" and re-invoke the ref on this sentence per direct quoting
"saying, "You can" → "saying that "you can" because this is not a full sentence
"as "nuanced," she ended up the review" → "as "nuanced"; she ended up the review"
K. Peake I think I have fixed everything, or almost everything, could you revise that I did not miss anything, or am I just allowed one final review? IXCat (talk) 11:10, 21 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
IXCat Great work here and there are still some issues though, however of course you have a final review its not instant pass or fail like a job interview! What needs to be fixed please is change the part in Background to being about Kane's apartments in London, Paris and Los Angeles, re-invoke the ref after the sentence using a direct quote here, change "On "Miracle Aligner" the album its at" to using "is at" instead, removed the full stop from inside "Beatle-esque."", remove link on Arctic Monkeys in composition, author-link Zane Lowe, fix MOS:QWQ and MOS:CAPS issues of refs which are when they are using "" inside the title and the capitalization is unnecessary ones, also please remove or replace Forbes per WP:FORBES. --K. Peake13:54, 23 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
K. Peake Thank you! I've corrected those last notes you gave me, also tried to fix MOS:QWQ and MOS:CAPS issues, but I don't know if I've done it corectly or missed something IXCat (talk) 14:52, 24 June 2024 (UTC)Reply