Talk:Elizabeth Gorham Hoag

Latest comment: 16 years ago by BetacommandBot in topic WikiProject class rating

Recent tags edit

I've tagged this page with {{tone}} and {{weasel words}} tags because over all this page is too chatty. It doesn't sound like it belongs in an encyclopedia and only cites one source. As for the weasel words a great example of this on this page would be "She was a slender, delicate girl with a pale face, dark curly hair, and brilliant dark eyes" unless somebody has said this exactly (as in quoted, and not written by somebody for the use on a website) then it's unnecessary and could easily be summed up differently with appropriate sources. --ImmortalGoddezz 07:41, 9 January 2007 (UTC)Reply

I took out the phrase in question. Is there anything else you notice?--Gloriamarie 05:35, 19 April 2007 (UTC)Reply

WikiProject class rating edit

This article was automatically assessed because at least one article was rated and this bot brought all the other ratings up to at least that level. BetacommandBot 11:27, 27 August 2007 (UTC)Reply