Talk:Deborah A. Thomas

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Wikieditor19920 in topic Sources, detail

Sources, detail

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There's very little that I'm able to glean from a quick glance at this page, and a deeper skim reveals a lot of this article that should be condensed or cut entirely. The lead is a prime example: this is meant to serve as a concise overview of the subject of the article, not an in-depth history of every job they ever had, followed by a summary of every organization they ever worked at.

As for the sources, 16 of 19 are either articles written by the subject, or bios provided by organizations the subject worked for or is closely associated with. This is not in compliance with WP:NPOV or WP:SECONDARY. Wikieditor19920 (talk) 16:32, 26 April 2020 (UTC)Reply