Talk:Chiribaya Dog

Latest comment: 8 years ago by SMcCandlish in topic Cleanup

A paragraph, much less a section, does not a sentence make.

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The article here has potential, but needs expansion. Also, a single sentence does not qualify as a section and also does not qualify as a paragraph. A paragraph needs at least two sentences. A section will ideally have two paragraphs. Otherwise they need to be combined under another section. The best English teacher I had made it very simple. She said your paragraph is one idea, and it needs two supporting statements. One statement doesn't clarify it enough. Man I loved her! I hated English until I took her class in 8th grade. :) MagnoliaSouth (talk) 08:04, 8 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Cleanup

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Did some cleanup work on this. Someone fluent in Spanish needs to review to documentaries (they're mostly very short) and fix a few things.  — SMcCandlish ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ʌ≼  14:46, 15 April 2016 (UTC)Reply