Talk:Breaking Point (Keri Hilson song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Till I Go Home (talk · contribs) 11:50, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Hi, I will review the article to have the backlog going. 3 months is a long time to wait for a review. Thanks. Till I Go Home ^{talk edits} 11:50, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Issues

• No disambiguation links.
• It was written by --> Change it to "the song" etc. because of repetition.  Done
• The background section should be retitled to "development and inspiration" or something along that line. 'Background' is a broad term.  Done
• Hilson explained that she wrote the song about women's experiences --> Hilson explained that inspiration for writing the song came from women's experiences  Done
• The song shares its theme with "The Way You Love Me" as the they are both about "women coming to terms with what they need from a relationship". --> Uhh what? The they?  Done
• Hilson premiered "Breaking Point" --> "Breaking Point" premiered on...  Done
• Link girl-group  Done
• Link music critics  Done
• Concepcion likened it lyrical wise --> awkward prose  Done
• link En Vogue  Done
• One too many "it"s in the chart performance sub-section.  Done
• The video begins as she lounges in her bed --> awkward  Done
• Ref. 34 --> publisher is also Google.  Done
• Perhaps you could add an image to the article?  Done
• Has she performed it live?

  Yes, but only minor concerts that reliable sources don't cover. Pancake (talk) 13:12, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Overall

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   There aren't really any major issues in the article.

All issues have been addressed. I'm passing the article — Till I Go Home ^{talk edits} 13:29, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

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