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It seems to me that it's time for a standalone season article to exist for the second season of Better Call Saul since alot of content has already been added to the draft. A move into an article is necessary, in my opinion. Feel free to discuss, Thanks. The Optimistic One (talk) 20:57, 14 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

Yes, it's got an expanded lead and ratings section, but the production sections needs some serious addition to it to be considered worthy of an article. If you can't find the content, let another editor - there is WP:NORUSH for any article to exist straight away. Why is it necessary? Where is there so much bloat in the currently-existing articles, that this article would lessen the load on those ones? -- AlexTW 21:00, 14 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
It's just that i've been working a straight month on this draft, and it's distracting to look at at times, I have searched online several times for content to add to the production section and i found nothing. The Optimistic One (talk) 21:12, 14 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
As I said: If you can't find the content, let another editor. Time is irrelevant; drafts can exists for months, years. You didn't answer my questions either. -- AlexTW 21:14, 14 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
You could always write about the tax incentives for filming in those locations. Within a minute of looking on google I found a few articles talking about that with the show. That would increase the filming section a little. Esuka323 (talk) 00:18, 15 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
You could actually be on to something Esuka323. The Optimistic One (talk) 18:37, 15 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
I'm really sorry I couldn't help more. But maybe you should look at some of the more established pages out there like Game of Thrones, Westworld or something to get some inspiration from how other editors have handled these sections? Maybe they'll make you think of something you haven't previously. Esuka323 (talk) 00:57, 16 March 2018 (UTC)Reply
It's fine Esuka323, you never have to apologize to me. I appreciate all your efforts to make this draft better. Game of Thrones is insanely popular, so inspiration from that show does sound faithful. The Optimistic One (talk) 23:30, 16 March 2018 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

Latest comment: 3 years ago32 comments3 people in discussion
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Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 03:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Review forthcoming. Heartfox (talk) 03:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • (Rhea Seehorn), is comma unnecessary
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Jonathan Banks also reprises his role as Mike Ehrmantraut, who is engaged in a feud with the Mexican drug cartel after a staged altercation with Tuco Salamanca (Raymond Cruz), which was paid for by Nacho Varga (Michael Mando), lands Tuco in prison and draws Hector's (Mark Margolis) attention to Mike. I'm kind of confused; could this be split into 2 sentences/less commas?
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 13:02, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • critics, and comma unnecessary
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • season 1, season 2 I think these numbers should be spelled out
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • ref 1 needs archiving/fix broken link
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 18:57, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • I guess you can keep them as is but I would personally italicize Vulture, Fansided, etc. (unless it was like amc.com or something which doesn't make sense to be)
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • All of the main cast returned for this season. Bob Odenkirk returns as Jimmy McGill, Jonathan Banks returns as Mike Ehrmantraut, Rhea Seehorn returns as Kim Wexler, Patrick Fabian returns as Howard Hamlin, Michael Mando as Nacho Varga, and Michael McKean returns as Chuck McGill, Jimmy's elder brother. can some refs be here?
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:36, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Is there additional refs to ref 6 and 7 that apply to the second season?
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:36, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • Jimmy / Saul is hiding I would say "Jimmy hides"
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • is there a better source than newscastic for ref 7?
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:26, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • ref 8 publisher link is incorrect and not necessary (variety is okay alone)
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • if the cast (particularly the guest stars) had references for an episode they were in I think that would improve this article
  • who previously appeared in the Breaking Bad episode "Open House". this is probably not indicated in the episode. is there a source?
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:26, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • reference works should be linked to available articles
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:06, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • plot summary for episodess 6, 7, 8 are over 200 max words in MOS:TVPLOT
  • he's he is
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • claims to the DA not everyone knows what a DA is (link/unabbreviate)
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 18:58, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • second-season this is an odd form
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:00, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • SHOWBUZZDAILY’s it's okay to de-capitalize this (MOS:CAPS; also the full title includes "Updated:"
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 19:00, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • much like the previous is there a ref
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 18:13, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • "Better Call Saul : Season 2" why is there a space after Saul
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • gave the season as a whole 8.7/10 rated the season an 8.7 out of 10. (I think "out of" is okay)
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • precision." the sentence doesn't end with "precision"; quote inside period.
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • second season, Better second season ... Better (there's a part of the sentence cut out here
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:17, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • praised the show be more specific
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 18:13, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • 1 Live +7 ratings were not available, so Live +3 ratings have been used instead. consider writing "Live + seven-day DVR playback viewership was unavailable, so live + three-day is listed instead" for people unfamiliar with the term "Live + 7"
  Done The Optimistic One (talk) 18:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • second-season (season two or second season or second season's is clearer)
  Done Drovethrughosts (talk) 12:11, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

Placing on hold for seven days pending implementation of most suggestions above. Heartfox (talk) 05:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)Reply

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