Talk:Ben Ali Haggin

Continuing copyright issues

This article began with content copied from and closely following [1] and continues to contain derivative content from source. For an example of close paraphrasing, consider the following:

His art training began with travel to Munich, Bavaria where he studied at the Academy there, later returning to this country to study at the Art Students League in New York City.

The article says:

His art training began with travel to Munich, Bavaria where he studied at the Academy of Fine Arts. Haggin later returned to the United States to study at the Art Students League in New York City.

I've bolded copied content to make copying more clear. There are other passages that similarly follow quite closely.

While facts are not copyrightable, creative elements of presentation - including both structure and language - are. So that it will not constitute a derivative work, this article should be rewritten in the temporary space that is now linked from the article's front. The essay Wikipedia:Close paraphrasing contains some suggestions for rewriting that may help avoid these issues. The article Wikipedia:Wikipedia Signpost/2009-04-13/Dispatches, while about plagiarism rather than copyright concerns, also contains some suggestions for reusing material from sources that may be helpful, beginning under "Avoiding plagiarism".

Alternatively, if the material can be verified to be public domain or permission is provided, we can use the original text with proper attribution.

Please let me know at my talk page if you have questions about this. --Moonriddengirl ^(talk) 17:08, 12 January 2011 (UTC)

Ziegfeld

According to "Ziegfeld," a biography by Charles Higham, Haggin started work for him in 1915, both on the Midnight Frolic and the Follies. -- K72ndst (talk) 14:41, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

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