Talk:Barrackpore Trunk Road

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Desertarun in topic Did you know nomination

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 10:10, 5 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

5x expanded by ArnabSaha (talk). Self-nominated at 20:14, 31 May 2021 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:   - Iffy on this one
  • Other problems:   - Copyedit: needs comma between "Road" and "the"
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Pretty good work, but would like to see some more copyediting. I think that, while on it's a fine hook, it could be made more interesting (such as that it connects the first cantonment in India (Barrackpore), could also look at its history or the pipes under it) without exceeding the hook limit. MSG17 (talk) 23:01, 1 June 2021 (UTC)Reply

@MSG17: Thanks for the review. Yes, there are some issues and I will solve them ASAP. I was supposed to complete it yesterday, but had some personal life issue :(  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  06:09, 2 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
New hooks  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  07:22, 2 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
Hope your personal issue is resolved :( Anyway, yes, these hooks are more interesting (there's accidentally two "that"s in a row in the second one, but I think they'll fix it in the prep area).   Approved MSG17 (talk) 13:10, 2 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
Corrected the issue mentioned above.    Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  13:51, 2 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
Addition: A request to the reviewer (MSG17) and promoter, if possible include this image.  Saha ❯❯❯ Stay safe  20:00, 3 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
 
Southern end at Shyambazar 5 point crossing