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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 29 September 2020 and 18 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Thatblonde678.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:35, 17 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Suggestion to improve the article

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I've noticed you want to make this article, but noticed some things that may need to get changed. Of course, I am very uneducated in the ways of the Wikipedia editors, so I don't even know if these problems are significant (tbh, they probably will have no significant impact in the creation of the article).

I've noticed that there are only two citations. This is usually an insufficient amount of citations, especially for a biography, so I'd suggest adding a bit more citations to further verify everything here is true.

I also would've said the Google Sites website would be an unverifiable source, however, the page does provide references at the bottom, so idk about this.

Hope this help you with any future editing, and hope this suggestion doesn't discourage you from continuing to edit on Wikipedia. JMVR1 (Communicate) (Validate my actions (for my ego, ofc)) (Email me) :) 04:01, 16 November 2020 (UTC)Reply