Talk:Arthur Honeyman
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Martina Nolte in topic Needs improvement
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Needs improvement edit
<COPY> from here:
- [...] Footnote 7 is a bare reference; footnote 3 lacks an access date; the EL section should be removed as if an EL is used as a source it does not go into an EL section; the W:LEDE section should be expanded; then overall it needs expansion, for instance his date of birth and date of death are missing as are the years as to the moves; lastly the career section jumps around instead of chronological order which gets confusing. [...] Aboutmovies (talk) 18:16, 6 December 2016 (UTC)
<END OF COPY> --Martina Nolte talk 07:15, 7 December 2016 (UTC)
PS:
--Martina Nolte talk 07:32, 7 December 2016 (UTC) update 02:28, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
- date of birth; May 10, 1940 Done
- date of death; December 08, 2008 Done
--Martina Nolte talk 04:23, 8 December 2016 (UTC) update 02:28, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
- footnote 7 Done
- footnote 3 access date Done
- EL section removed Done
- career section chronological order Done
--Martina Nolte talk 02:28, 12 December 2016 (UTC)