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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Babyphilosopher. Peer reviewers: AFishInThePercolator.

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Clearly, a lot of research has been done on the filmmaker from several different reliable sources in order to present this well-written and overall well done article. The lead functions for its exact purpose, to give an overview of the subject while not being redundant or misleading. The structure of the piece is clear with each heading given sufficient prose to represent balance and equal importance. The entry remains neutral, never using biased language or making bold unsourced claims. To be honest, the only suggestion I can make is to provide a photo of the filmmaker (if possible) and to add the little biography box [in the top right] in order to present a standard Wikipedia article. Very good work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by AFishInThePercolator (talkcontribs) 03:38, 1 March 2016 (UTC)Reply