Talk:Andy Davidson (Torchwood)

Image?

Is there rationale for adding this image? Having a promotional image in place will bring into line with other Torchwood character pages; i.e Gwen Cooper, Ianto Jones, Rhys Wlliams etc

http://www.bbc.co.uk/torchwood/images/s3/characters/pc_andy_446.jpg

--92.18.2.68 (talk) 19:39, 1 March 2011 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 05:16, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

Review

Overview:

• Dablinks tool has an error message right now, so I will check it again later.
• Inconsistency between "premiere" and "première".

References:

• 3 redirects
• Remove the extra 0's on some of the dates, for example on "01 January 2007".
• Link every work and publisher in the refs, or only once. There is an inconsistency. For example, ref1 links to BBC Three, while ref3 doesn't, and ref5 is linked.
• Some missing publishers. For example, the publisher of Digital Spy is Hachette Filipacchi Médias.

Lead:

• Unlink "fictional character" and "television programme" per WP:OVERLINK.
• "PC Andy" and "Davidson" need to be in quotation marks, and not apostrophes.
• "External commentary..." Oddly worded, and it appears only one person has referred to him as such.
• Some more reception of the character, from an overall view, should be added to the lead.

Characterisation:

• "Though the casting call had specified Welsh actors only, the role of Andy was cast to Tom Price, who does not originate from Wales." It might be of interest to note where he is from, if not Wales.
• "2008 episode "Adrift" reveals..." → The episode "Adrift" (2008) reveals... or The 2008 episode "Adrift" reveals...
• What exactly is the relevance to the quote?

Verdict

• Prose is well-written, references need some work. 7 days to fix the issues. Statυs (talk) 11:01, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
• I gave you a few extra days on accident. It's been 12 days and the issues I have pointed out here have not been resolved. I reluctantly have to fail this article. Statυs (talk) 14:20, 30 November 2012 (UTC)

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