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The image doesn't meet WP:NFCC as of right now. It doesn't help the reader understand the topic; its just a girl with her hands up. Expand the rationale, or remove. Production information, etc.?
Changed to be the lion-headed part of a Seraphim, the making of which is talked about in-depth in the article.--Gen. Quon(Talk) 15:59, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
"One of the Nephilim's souls is taken to Heaven." isn't correctly. Re-writing to: "One of Nephilim's souls is taken to Heaven." without the as it makes it incorrect
Your suggested change would make the sentence grammatically incorrect - "the Nephilim's" is right 129.11.77.197 (talk) 10:18, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Yeah, that's grammatically incorrect.--Gen. Quon(Talk) 15:53, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the series' wider mythology, or overarching fictional history → a stand-alone plot which is unconnected to the mythology, or overarching fictional history, of The X-Files
""All Souls" received a Nielsen household rating of 8.5 and was watched by 13.44 million viewers" re-write to: ""All Souls" earned a Nielsen household rating of 8.5, being watched by 13.44 million viewers in its intital broadcast" as cleanup
"amiss, makes his way outside" needs an "and"/fixing
That's grammatically sound: "Dara's father makes his way outside." is a sentence; "Dara's father, Lance Kernof (Eric Keenleyside), makes his way outside." is also a sentence with a descriptor added; "Dara's father, Lance Kernof (Eric Keenleyside), realizing something is amiss, makes his way outside." is another sentence, with another descriptor, this time, of action.--Gen. Quon(Talk) 15:53, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Again, we're talking about THE God in Christianity, and that's how his name is supposed to capitalized (Thus, why I linked it to God in Christianity).--Gen. Quon(Talk) 15:53, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
"All Souls" was written by John Shiban and Frank Spotnitz, and directed by Allen Coulter" Huh, what? They wrote the teleplay, right. Therefore, the story writers are missing now.
Clarified that the episode's script was written by the two, the idea was by the others.--Gen. Quon(Talk) 15:53, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
""All Souls" premiered on the Fox network in the United States on April 26, 1998. The episode later debuted in the United Kingdom on BBC One on February 24, 1999" re-write to: ""All Souls" originally aired on the Fox network on April 26, 1998, and was first broadcast in the United Kingdom on BBC One on February 24, 1999".
Again, why? 'The' is the most used word in the English language, and there's no reason to remove it.--Gen. Quon(Talk) 15:53, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
'All Souls' should be double quotes here, in "Reception"
Are you referring to the Vitaris quote? Per MOS, it should be in single quotes, since it's inside a quote.--Gen. Quon(Talk) 15:53, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
References
Ref. 1, 3, 4, 5, 7, 12: I know this is for GA, but, you could still link the book sources in the footnotes to "Bibliography" link as in FA and A-Class articles. Would just make the article better. Note that this is a suggestion.
This is an excessive amount of work, and I'll do that if I try to get this up to FA or A-Class. Not necessary for GA.--Gen. Quon(Talk) 15:53, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Again, this is an excessive amount of work, and I'll do that if I try to get this up to FA or A-Class. Not necessary for GA.--Gen. Quon(Talk) 15:53, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
Ref. 2: "Fox Broadcasting Corporation" should be linked to "Fox Broadcasting Company" instead
Actually, I went back and changed this. The site is called "The X-Files Wiki", not "The X-Files" (that's the show). The title and line might be repetitive, but we can't change a name just because it sounds better.--Gen. Quon(Talk) 23:14, 6 August 2012 (UTC)Reply
"TXF Season 5" should be "The X-Files" to match it with FA, "Triangle" getting it closer to there.