Talk:Adolph Aschoff

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Valfontis in topic Cleanup

Cleanup edit

This is a great start, but the article needs an encyclopedic introduction (introduce the subject in the first sentence, explain why he is significant), the writing needs to be made more encyclopedic and hopefully some of the references can be turned into footnotes. Let me know if you need help. Katr67 14:29, 4 June 2007 (UTC)Reply

I have a feeling this article is a copyvio, but it's not a cut and paste from the Internet, anyway. Katr67 20:05, 3 October 2007 (UTC)Reply
As of today, the article still needs wikification and copy editing, so I've replaced the tag. Valfontis (talk) 08:19, 2 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

more reference edit

This article concerns Aschoff's family: http://oregonmag.com/Pintarich402.htm -Pete 19:33, 3 October 2007 (UTC)Reply