Talk:2016 Aligarh Muslim University campus violence

Recent Developments

Are there any developments since then? KHAN TANZEEM (talk) 03:49, 4 February 2018 (UTC)

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The victim rushed to the proctor's office to file his complaint. As soon as news of the incident spread students belonging to the two rival factions gathered and a clash broke out. Police said that Mehtaab was shot dead late last night near the Proctor's office where the warring groups exchanged fire with each other. The rampaging students set afire a jeep and over half-a-dozen bikes. The mob also indulged in arson and set afire the proctor's office building. The violence was so widespread that it took the police nearly two hours to defuse the situation at different spots of the campus. An official of AMU said that trouble between rival groups belonging to Azamgarh and Sambhal regions has been simmering since quite some time now. Rapid Action Force has been deployed at all sensitive spots especially in view of the entrance test for the engineering college is scheduled today and more than 13,000 candidates are expected to appear from the Aligarh campus centre alone.
— The Times of India

The article says:

The victim of the assault rushed to the proctor's office to file his complaint. As soon as news of the incident spread, students belonging to the two rival factions gathered and a clash broke out. Police said that the victim, Mehtaab was shot dead later that night near the Proctor's office where the warring groups exchanged fire. The students set afire a jeep and over half-a-dozen bikes. The mob also indulged in arson and set the proctor's office building on fire. The violence was so widespread that it took the police nearly two hours to control the situation. An official of AMU said that trouble between rival groups belonging to Azamgarh and Sambhal regions has been simmering since quite some time. Rapid Action Force was later deployed at all sensitive spots to ensure safety during the entrance test for the engineering college which was scheduled to happen the next day with more than 13,000 expected candidates.
— 2016 Aligarh Muslim University campus violence 14:45, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

This is an example; there may be other passages that similarly follow quite closely to this or other sources. Please let me know if you have questions about this. -- Black Falcon ^(talk) 23:25, 20 January 2020 (UTC)

@Black Falcon:  Doing... --qedk (t 桜 c) 13:43, 21 January 2020 (UTC)

 Done --qedk (t 桜 c) 14:02, 21 January 2020 (UTC)