Talk:1897 Atlantic hurricane season
Latest comment: 10 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review
1897 Atlantic hurricane season has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: March 5, 2014. (Reviewed version). |
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Structure. Jdorje 02:11, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 18:51, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
I guess I'll review this since you reviewed mine :)
- "The first system, Hurricane One," - since "Hurricane One" isn't really a name, I don't think you need to mention it here.
- Why do you mention knots in the lede with regards to ACE?
- You should mention H1's extratropical history lasting until September 10
- You say that H1's rough seas capsized the ship in the lede, but don't mention it in the section. Why not?
- "No impact was reported in the Florida Keys." - source?
- New England impact for TS 3?
- TS 4 caused some deaths per NHC
- More info about the Triton here, including survivors. The captain apparently committed suicide when he heard the ship was sinking. Here is a list of news sources from October 1897 containing "Triton"
- "The system weakened while crossing the island" - say Cuba here since it's a new paragraph
- Any reason you didn't use the Monthly Weather Review? It has some more info on storms five and six
The writing is generally decent, but I think it's a little lacking on the comprehensive front. Fix these and I'll be happy to pass. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:51, 4 March 2014 (UTC)