Talk:1897 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 18:51, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

I guess I'll review this since you reviewed mine :)

• "The first system, Hurricane One," - since "Hurricane One" isn't really a name, I don't think you need to mention it here.

• Removed--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

• Why do you mention knots in the lede with regards to ACE?

• Removed--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

• You should mention H1's extratropical history lasting until September 10

• Done--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

• You say that H1's rough seas capsized the ship in the lede, but don't mention it in the section. Why not?

• It is mention in the section. "The crew of the barkentine St. Peter reported that another ship capsized with 45 men aboard; all of them drowned.[4][5]"--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

• "No impact was reported in the Florida Keys." - source?

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 04:46, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

• New England impact for TS 3?

• Couldn't find anything for New England. :( --12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

• TS 4 caused some deaths per NHC

• Ok, but what should I do? There isn't a specific total mentioned.--12george1 (talk) 19:31, 4 March 2014 (UTC)

• More info about the Triton here, including survivors. The captain apparently committed suicide when he heard the ship was sinking. Here is a list of news sources from October 1897 containing "Triton"

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 04:46, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

• "The system weakened while crossing the island" - say Cuba here since it's a new paragraph

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 04:46, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

• Any reason you didn't use the Monthly Weather Review? It has some more info on storms five and six

• Better?--12george1 (talk) 04:46, 5 March 2014 (UTC)

The writing is generally decent, but I think it's a little lacking on the comprehensive front. Fix these and I'll be happy to pass. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:51, 4 March 2014 (UTC)