Talk:(You Drive Me) Crazy Tour

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Reviewer: Arre 9 (talk · contribs) 06:39, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

Background and development

• "...premiere of the music video of..." → "premiere of the music video for"
• Also, no mistake here, but which Snow White does the mirror resemble? a book? a movie?
• "Spears was also joined on stage by eight dancers. She had five costumes changes during the show." → "During the show, Spears was joined on stage by eight dancers, and had five costume changes." ('Also' mentioned twice in neighbor sentences)

Concert synopsis

• "The show with a skit in which the dancers came out of lockers and stayed in the stage until a bell rang" → should it be "the show opened with a skit"?

Broadcasting and recordings

• "...it was broadcast in a special in Fox. The special was aired several times during the year" → "it was broadcast as a special on Fox, which was aired several other times during the year." ('special' over-mentioned)

Overall, apart from this tiny wording issues, the article is really great. I'll just wait till you make this minor adjustments until I pass it. Great work! Arre 06:39, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

All done! Thanks for the review!  — Statυs (talk, contribs) 06:46, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

Okay. Passed :) Arre 06:49, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

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