Talk:Philipp Hochmair

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Latest comment: 2 years ago by Hoary in topic What's wrong


COI tag (June 2022)

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two SPAs have worked on this. Theroadislong (talk) 18:12, 19 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hello , thank you very much for editing and publishing the article. Pacsolis (talk) 19:25, 19 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

Close connection with this subject

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As the main author of this article, I would like to point out that I do not have a close connection with the main subject of the article. I published the article in other languages because I like the activities, i.e. the performances and films. Pacsolis (talk) 19:21, 19 June 2022 (UTC)Reply

What's wrong

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The lead is currently "Philipp Hochmair (German: [ˈfɪǀɪp ˈhoːxmɑɪɐ]); born 16 October 1973) is an Austrian theater, film and television actor", to which my first reaction is "Yes, I imagine that thousands of people are." I suggest appending to that opening sentence something like ", best known for [whatever]". The "filmography" includes film (well, of course) and not-film (so why call it "filmography"?) and more importantly is unreferenced. And a minor matter of formatting: not "(by Goethe)[7]," (etc) but instead "(by Goethe),[7]" (etc). -- Hoary (talk) 21:51, 19 June 2022 (UTC)Reply