Copying relevant comment on some flaws of the draft

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This was posted by user "Angry Harpy" in a different part of Wikipedia but since it directly relates to ways to improve the draft I am copying it here:

Forich, I've no significant concerns related to the reliability of this local newspaper within this context. However, quoting the article (which is little more than entertainment fluff) as describing this specific couple as "iconic within Colombian television" when in reality, they were mentioned as part of a list and seemingly only because they just so happened to show up at this event makes this clearly WP:UNDUE. You're attempting to write a BLP about an at the very best borderline notable actor, but trying to wring individual drops of notability from sources like this won't lead you to success

. Forich (talk) 21:14, 10 February 2022 (UTC)Reply