Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Ninja Gaiden (NES)/Archive2

Ninja Gaiden (NES) edit

I am re-nominating this article for peer review in an effort to get this article to Good Article status. I followed some of the recommendations as given in the previous assessment as well as the previous peer review. I'm hoping someone can go over the whole thing. Probably the biggest thing here is the Story section; I don't think I'm that good in making plot summaries.

I also welcome any recommendations/improvement from participants in the Military History WikiProject. MuZemike (talk) 19:58, 23 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think that the cover of Nintendo Power is necessary. You should take it off. GamerPro64 (talk) 20:50, 16 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, I was kind of thinking of the same thing. I don't think it even complies at all with WP:NFCC. MuZemike 05:21, 17 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

You should also take off the first sentence in the Reception section and reword the second sentence. GamerPro64 (talk) 02:00, 18 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]